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Congrats Bobryk. I'm sure I'm a little late on the uptake here, but I remember you talking about your book when I was last here. Congrats on finishing AND getting published. I'll be getting a copy fairly soon, when I get enough money.
Hmmm. Theres still something odd about Lilia...She looks....Crosseyed?
Much better on Stacy, Lilia's hair looks good, with the exception of something I'll cover in a second, Did I just now notice that Kyara's eyes don't seem to match, or did you change her eyes?
Still need to cut Lacy's hair way down, still looks like she is hiding someting on top of her head. Keven's face is still a few degrees to far turned. either change the face to be looking the same direction, or change the hair.
Ok, now to get to that point I left out a little while ago.
Since you are using a clear background, its easy to see that you have missed a few spots of white. Namely, in Lilia's hair, In Kevin's hair, and in between Maya and Kyara.