CarbomandraBrillante

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I'll start off with the clothes. The clothes are way too tight...she can't breath. The gloves are cutting off circulation to her hands. There is a reason they are so small.

If you notice, the dress in her OA flares out at her knees. You have it flaring out at mid-calf. Good luck moving around in that.

She is anorexic. Give her some more meat, especially in the hip area. Speaking of hips, the hips should be higher cause the torso is just too long.

Her boobs are fairly nice, except for the fact that the far one is lumpy and the boobs are too low. Raise them up. Saggy and lumpy boobs are never okay.

Like I said earlier, the hands are too small. Roughly...the hands are about the size of the face.

Her draping chestpiece is not centered with her body. Legs aren't either. You have to pay attention as to the angle of the mug. It may look like a full frontal, but it is actually turned a little.

The belt doesn't look like a belt, it looks like part of the dress. Make it look like it is actually on her, plz.

The hair...it is pretty nice, but wrong. In her OA, her hair goes down to her waist. Ninian got a hair cut apparently. Gotta finish the shading as well.

Upper arm is too long and the forearm is too short. You gotta fix that.

The sprite overall needs to be bit taller as well. She feels dwarved. And don't be afraid to add more colors where needed like in the clothes. It could make all the difference.