Aura Wolf

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Grass looks tile spammed since I can pick out spots and see the same grass tile used.
Walls next to the big pillar on the right need to have shading. Same for the mini pillar head.
Some floor tiles are missing shading even though they're under and/or to the right of a wall.
The entire horizontal wall with the breakable one needs one more height.
The first decorative of the 3 height wall that's touching the right edge has a tile for that kind of...situation :3
Palette choice wasn't very good IMO since it hurts my eyes a bit thanks to the colors. I'd choose a different castle one.

QUOTE (Aura Wolf @ Jun 26 2012, 07:37 AM)

Walls and chests need shading from underneath; use the floor tiles with shading on top. Some need the tiles with shading on top and left (Corners, as well as the tile one right of the chest and one below the wall. Not the staircase). Pillars need shading from the right. Some of the walls need to be connected, for they look really awkward. Height is also a problem. If you go down 1 set of stairs, the wall should reflect that. For example, if the throne room is at a height of 1 (Just the regular wall) and there's stairs, the room below the stairs should have a height of 2 (Regular wall and some decorative wall stuff).

Edited for your edit and also this:
- Carpet's still too long (IMO).
- Walls are different heights than the other walls on the same level and room.
- The decorative wall tiles need shading when they're by a corner.

QUOTE (Matt Snow @ Jun 22 2012, 09:57 PM)

Thanks for the support Blazer & Chesire. New map:

Walls and chests need shading from underneath; use the floor tiles with shading on top. Some need the tiles with shading on top and left (Corners, as well as the tile one right of the chest and one below the wall. Not the staircase).
Pillars need shading from the right.
Some of the walls need to be connected, for they look really awkward at, like the one between the double vertical doors and the wall to the left of the throne.
Height is also a problem. If you go down 1 set of stairs, the wall should reflect that.
For example, if the throne room is at a height of 1 (Just the regular wall) and there's stairs, the room below the stairs should have a height of 2 (Regular wall and some decorative wall stuff).
Carpet's a bit too big IMO. I'd make it smaller...maybe trim one tile wide from the left, the right, and one long for the bottom? Experiment
Last thing is that the map is rather empty in the bottom right portion of the map.
Too lazy and sleepy to critique the others atm.

Iirc, it has to do with the module itself. If you open the original SA and the one I uploaded in Notepad, there's something different about both. Can't remember what though.

http://www.mediafire...oe4eiz42swmbcy8