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[FahadRashid327]

I know i've been missin a long time but sorry

 

here is Laurier the older sister I talked about  Laurier.bmp   86.18KB   10 downloads 

 

there is 2 I don't know I think the one on the right is the best and it make Laurier older

and the one on the left is making her younger then her brothers but it give her mystery

one of the eyes are flaming red because of the blessing of a mighty phoenix who is became part of her soul

she regains health and in the future she will know how to use her abilities 

 

 

and this is General Ada   gnrl aida 2.png   5.31KB   3 downloads she just an extra to know how much I achieved while I'm gone she a wyvern lord that's all you gonna have guys and don't worry couple of weeks and the demo might be here

 

[kirant]

They looks pretty good.

 

(Personal wonks from a non-artist ahead.  Take with a grain of salt)

 

I might actually go the other direction on your Laurier sprites.  I'm of the personal opinion that the one of the right looks more "natural" in terms of hair.  The left sprite feels like the bangs are somewhat unnautural in terms of length.  If it's something like a comb over from the character's right hand side, The way it's stiched in makes it feel awkward.  Additionally, where her left hand side's hair meets the armour on the shoulder (the furthest right from our perspective, right near the gold trim) cuts off fairly abruptly.

 

There are some disagreements I have with the art on the right but she overall gives more of a Calvina Coulange feel, hair that I feel meets the realm of "anime generic".  It works and, while a bit dense in her amount of hair, feels fairly natural.

 

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In terms of General Ada, can I ask what that is on the bottom right of her art?  Is that a shield or a massive shoulder plate?  If it's a shoulder plate, I assume there's a reason why a wyvern lord would only have one plate?

[FahadRashid327]

They looks pretty good.

 

(Personal wonks from a non-artist ahead.  Take with a grain of salt)

 

I might actually go the other direction on your Laurier sprites.  I'm of the personal opinion that the one of the right looks more "natural" in terms of hair.  The left sprite feels like the bangs are somewhat unnautural in terms of length.  If it's something like a comb over from the character's right hand side, The way it's stiched in makes it feel awkward.  Additionally, where her left hand side's hair meets the armour on the shoulder (the furthest right from our perspective, right near the gold trim) cuts off fairly abruptly.

 

There are some disagreements I have with the art on the right but she overall gives more of a Calvina Coulange feel, hair that I feel meets the realm of "anime generic".  It works and, while a bit dense in her amount of hair, feels fairly natural.

 

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In terms of General Ada, can I ask what that is on the bottom right of her art?  Is that a shield or a massive shoulder plate?  If it's a shoulder plate, I assume there's a reason why a wyvern lord would only have one plate?

 

it's an armor that extend all way to here fingers like an evil witch hand but with steel 

 

also i need help in some characters names ides stuff like that if got anything please help me 

sometime it's good to ask help from friends   

[Fire Blazer]

not bad, somehow the neck looks a little weird for me (not sure how though, sorry lol) but the shoulder pad design is kinda cool, I'm guessing it's custom since I don't remember anything like that in the original GBAFE sprites, XD

[FahadRashid327]

 laurier B A.bmp   17.98KB   9 downloads Laurier B A 

 

wish you happy day 

 

[xcrash1998]

This looks completely awesome, I don't even know what to say. Just awesome work.