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#1 Bobryk

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Posted 30 July 2011 - 03:22 AM

Yeah, so I'm pretty freaking excited and need to tell people. I'm trying to keep it as secretive from irl friends as possible so I can provide them with a nice WTF when I throw a hardcover book with my name on it in their faces tongue.gif so it's coming here first.

Note: This post has been cleaned and revamped!

News and updates!
It's out!
-You can buy it on Barnes and Noble: http://www.barnesand...-...+royal+seal, Amazon: http://www.amazon.co...tmm_pap_title_0
- I get my 60 complimentary copies in two weeks. 40 paperback, 20 hardcover. If you want a signed copy with some extra goodies, then I would wait. (It'll also be a bit cheaper.) But if you want it now, I recommend buying off Amazon (it's the cheapest reseller atm.) If you want to buy from B&N, I suggest buying it from my publisher-- same price, but I get more royalties if it's done off my publisher's store. Heh.
-It's not available for Kindle, I believe. But it is available for Nook. Sorry about that.

General facts about the book

The title:
The Dream War: The Royal Seal
Written by yours truly under my pseudonym (pen name) Nick Alex. Why? My last name is far too long :S
-It's a fiction/fantasy/medieval novel.
-I write to entertain.
-It's written in a more modern style rather than, say, LOTR, to attract a larger fan base.
-It's the first book of a four part series.
-It's 222 pages.
-It's pretty damn awesome.


About the story
-It's very fast-paced and action-packed. There isn't a lot of "downtime" and even when there's some sort of long dialogue between characters, expect something to be happening elsewhere.
-There's a lot of dialogue, and each of the main characters has a distinctly different dialect (way of speaking) from the others. 75% of the dialogue you can guess who is speaking before reading "so-and-so said" just by looking at how they talk.
-Instead of describing certain things through narrative, I have a character speak it instead.
-Speaking of dialogue, it's one of my greater strengths. Expect many meaningful phrases and quotes.
-It's violent. The beginning fight scenes start off tame, but it doesn't stay that way for long. Expect to cringe when you read some of my battle scenes.
-It's emotional. You'll get a strong sense that my characters are real, and their problems will (hopefully) invoke reactions.
-It's HILARIOUS. Especially in the beginning. Expect many wondrous one-liners from my comic-relief character.
-Each of the 75,000 words I've chosen is necessary. There are no long, drawn-out descriptions of people's hair, the floor, curtains, or other stupid crap that writers feel the need to describe heavily. Simply put, it's blunt and straight forward.
-To sum it up: it's an action-packed thriller that will make you cringe in disgust, tear up from sadness, and laugh your head off.


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It was late, but he couldn’t sleep. His mother and father were arguing again, like they always did at night. They thought they were keeping their sons, who they both loved very much, out of it, but little did they know that their oldest tossed, turned and listened to every word, every night.
Tonight was much worse than it had ever been. His mother was crying and screaming while his father relentlessly yelled.
“Luna, time and time again I’ve caught you! You must stop this heresy!”
“No! You can’t control me, Terrowan!” she yelled back. Her voice became disturbing; it sounded like the normal voice of a woman, but was riddled with a deep, demonic undertone, as if her vocal cords were slowly becoming possessed by the Lord of Hell. . .
“I am going to master this . . . thisss power! I will be the first to use it for good; I will protect our boys, I will protect everyone! I just need. . .more. . .more power. . .”
“As the last of the Holy Warriors, I will not allow this! I shall not, cannot, and will not sit idly while my own wife studies the Forbidden Arts!”
All of a sudden, a brief flash of fire erupted in the darkness. It was over in a second, but Tristan would forever feel its burn.
Afterward, his father’s voice became more somber, and Tristan could hardly make out what he was saying.
“And my nightmares have been confirmed. . .” he said. “Not only are you falling victim to the seduction of the Forbidden Arts, you can cast it as well.”
“Can’t you ssseee, Terrowan? With this poWer, I can de—StrOy. . .”
“I see it plainly, and I have but one solution. Luna, I command you to leave my house! Your soul has already been corrupted down to the core; now the magic will consume you from within. You are beyond saving, let alone salvation!”
“Heh..heh heh heh. . .Terrowan, you would simply thRoW me oUt? YoUR beLoVeD wIfe?
“. . . It has already consumed most of your heart . . . I am sorry, Luna, my love. . .”
Another flash of light blinded the room. This time, however, it was not fire, but of pure, holy energy. It was strong enough to wake both of Tristan’s brothers up; the poor youngest child began bawling his one year old eyes out. And in another instant, his mother was gone, fleeing at the sight of his father’s Holy Magic.
Terrowan barged into his children’s room and took all of them in his arms. “Where’s Mommy?” “What happened to Mommy?” the two oldest repeatedly cried, tears streaming down their faces.
And their father could not help but shed one himself.
“Mommy’s gone,” he sniffled. “For a long, long time.”




But yeah. Pretty damn excited.
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#2 Rujio

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Posted 30 July 2011 - 03:38 AM

Well, that's certainly exciting! I just started writing a story (which, other than the 75,000 words part actually fits all of the very vague descriptions of yours.... lol.) Anyways, I would love to ever have a shot at getting it published. That's awesome.

When do you think it'll be out? And we don't even get to hear the name? sad.gif

Could you tell us what the basic plot is? Maybe give like what would be on the back cover of the book or something?


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Posted 30 July 2011 - 03:55 AM

QUOTE (Rujio @ Jul 29 2011, 10:38 PM)
Well, that's certainly exciting! I just started writing a story (which, other than the 75,000 words part actually fits all of the very vague descriptions of yours.... lol.)


Word (no pun intended) that's awesome. Fantasy, ftw. And once you get rolling, words just start to flow, really. That's what happened to me. Midway through mine I was like "shit this isn't working" but it worked out in the end. Don't worry about words or pages for now; just keep writing until your plot is done.

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Anyways, I would love  to ever have a shot at getting it published. That's awesome.


It's hard (it's a surprisingly competitive industry these days) but it's doable. You need to overcome quite a lot (many companies don't accept fantasy works or if they don't like it/feel it applies to too much of a cult audience they reject it outright), which sucks and wastes your money and time.

Just stick with it and it'll happen, though. Trust me.
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When do you think it'll be out? And we don't even get to hear the name? sad.gif


Hrm. It's almost August now, so maybe the finished product will be out by...September? If so, it'll be available maybe late October/early November. It's tough to say though. And for the name...maybe later tongue.gif

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Maybe give like what would be on the back cover of the book or something?


Ah, that's a great idea...too bad that's one of the things I still have to do XD
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Posted 30 July 2011 - 04:30 AM

Oh, I meant more that I'm only 2600 words in right now. I'm making fairly quick progress now, though.

Hmm. Well, I guess more and more people have the time to write full novels, and there's so much fantasy already that people will be drawn to writing that. I'd never really thought about actually getting my story published, though. It would be strange if I became an author given what I've been debating going into.

Oh, so it's not gonna be like 9 months. That's not bad.

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Posted 30 July 2011 - 04:58 AM

Yeah, thank God. With three other books that will (eventually) be on the way, I can't even imagine 9 months for each one...

I'll be graduating from college at that point which is scary enough as it is >.>
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Posted 30 July 2011 - 05:03 AM

Well, Brian Jacques released 20 somethin' books before he died (sad.gif), and he started rather late in life. Three more shouldn't be too hard compared to that, right?
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Posted 30 July 2011 - 05:08 AM

Writing them? Nah.

Publishing them while trying to find my way in the real world? Yeah XD
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Posted 30 July 2011 - 07:55 AM

Big reader here; so I'll defiantly check it out. I have a few friends who are published, although not as exciting when some irl gets published. This should be pretty neat. Your friends will have a hell of time knowing someone who is published so be ready for that. People around my college is that way anyway. Good luck with the publishing process. Happy for you.
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Posted 30 July 2011 - 04:25 PM

Thanks. Right now I'm just relieved I can take a somewhat break from writing while they copyedit my stuff. No more staying up till 3 am writing (for some time anyway)!


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Posted 02 August 2011 - 05:04 PM

First post updated heavily. What will be on the back cover will also be added soon.
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 07:43 PM

Two words:

So buying.

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Posted 02 August 2011 - 08:00 PM

QUOTE (bblues @ Aug 2 2011, 12:43 PM)
Two words:

So buying.

QFT

If it only going be available as an ebook for kindles?
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 09:26 PM

I may be interpreting your question wrong, but it's going to be both a physical book and an e-book.

Also, already thinking about buying? You guys are awesome. Just so you know what you're getting yourselves into (or to scare you away from it XD) this is what you can expect.
It's also in the first post.
wall of text about the story itself, with NO PLOT given (Click Here To Hide/Show Text)

About the story itself:
-It's very fast-paced and action-packed. There isn't a lot of "downtime" and even when there's some sort of long dialogue between characters, expect something to be happening elsewhere.
-There's a lot of dialogue, and each of the main characters has a distinctly different dialect (way of speaking) from the others. 75% of the dialogue you can guess who is speaking before reading "so-and-so said" just by looking at how they talk.
-Instead of describing certain things through narrative, I have a character speak it instead.
-Speaking of dialogue, it's one of my greater strengths. Expect many meaningful phrases and quotes.
-It's violent. The beginning fight scenes start off tame, but it doesn't stay that way for long. Expect to cringe when you read some of my battle scenes.
-It's emotional. You'll get a strong sense that my characters are real, and their problems will (hopefully) invoke reactions.
-It's HILARIOUS. Especially in the beginning. Expect many wondrous one-liners from my comic-relief character.
-Each of the 75,000 words I've chosen is necessary. There are no long, drawn-out descriptions of people's hair, the floor, curtains, or other stupid crap that writers feel the need to describe heavily. Simply put, it's blunt and straight forward.
-To sum it up: it's an action-packed thriller that will make you cringe in disgust, tear up from sadness, and laugh your head off.

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Posted 02 August 2011 - 09:54 PM

I waa more asking if it would be an ebook for other devices, like a nook.

Glad to hear there isn't a lot of superfluous describing.
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 10:05 PM

Congratulations man, you must be psyched as hell

Can I get a special mention on the inside cover, or can there be a Seraph character in the next book????
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 10:27 PM

Purchase a book directly from me (and not amazon, barnes and noble, etc) and I can physically write in a Seraph mention before shipping tongue.gif

And Rujio, I have no idea, unfortunately. I don't know much about e-books in the first place XD
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 10:28 PM

I will then!
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 10:30 PM

Haha, word. Sounds good, my friend. Thank you!
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 10:42 PM

Can I draw you a cover?

This is legit. Seriously. Kudos. The only publisher I can manage to find for my stuff is a pure indie online only publisher (and I'm going to need to get my own ISBN if I want to sell it on eBay or at cons), and I haven't had the money to get it started... so yeah, great going!

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Once I get my own gig running I'll definitely make sure I get a copy. Post a link on amazon or ebay when you get it up!
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 11:12 PM

Awesome. I'm a big reader as well, so I'll see if I can pick it up at some point.

Wish you the best of luck in your ventures as a writer. It'd be cool to one day be able to say "I helped run a forum that this great author once frequented. He was a pretty cool dude."
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