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Which splice is best
Started by cox21, Feb 21 2009 11:33 AM
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 11:33 AM
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 02:30 PM
Second. Although, the headband could use some revamping. Nice Cid.
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 03:01 PM
I'm going to vote for the second one as well, but to be honest, none of them are very good. You didn't put parts in the right place (like, it's off by a few pixels), forgot shading where necessary, etc.
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 03:39 PM
Im going to vote for the second one also.
Better than anything I could do. Lol.
Better than anything I could do. Lol.
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 03:43 PM
For the last one, never put girl's hair, on a guy's head. It's just....no.
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 04:44 PM
| QUOTE (Tino @ February 21, 2009 10:01 am) |
| I'm going to vote for the second one as well, but to be honest, none of them are very good. You didn't put parts in the right place (like, it's off by a few pixels), forgot shading where necessary, etc. |
What's shading?
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 05:01 PM
Different shades on armor, cloaks, hair. You're Marisa's face mask thing looked odd, because there was no shade on it.
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Posted 21 February 2009 - 06:28 PM
I'm gonna be totally honest, take this however you want. If you think I'm being too harsh, suck it up, you'll never get better without criticism, especially if you don't follow it.
None of them are good. You lack consistent shading, you lack proper colour patterns, the outlines are screwy, placement is terrible for most objects you're way over the colour limit, etc. I've noticed that usually all you do is copy and paste a piece and call it a day. You need to edit the pieces, custom parts on to these pieces, make them fit together nicely, readjust shading where needed, etc. Look over official sprites and try to mimic them. Or if need be, look at sprites done by The Blind Archer, The Merc, Uther33, Mage Knight 404 and myself to see what the shading is SUPPOSED to look like, as well as placement. Only through listening to constructive criticism and referencing the actual style will you get better, so I hope you take this to heart and learn from what I've said.
None of them are good. You lack consistent shading, you lack proper colour patterns, the outlines are screwy, placement is terrible for most objects you're way over the colour limit, etc. I've noticed that usually all you do is copy and paste a piece and call it a day. You need to edit the pieces, custom parts on to these pieces, make them fit together nicely, readjust shading where needed, etc. Look over official sprites and try to mimic them. Or if need be, look at sprites done by The Blind Archer, The Merc, Uther33, Mage Knight 404 and myself to see what the shading is SUPPOSED to look like, as well as placement. Only through listening to constructive criticism and referencing the actual style will you get better, so I hope you take this to heart and learn from what I've said.
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