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[AkaiHinata]

Telling a shooting star by me


I'm making a wish in front of a shooting star, I'm
Telling the starlight to covey my message to you.
Please know that i can never forget you, sweetheart,
I hope you know that i simply, love you. These are the
Feelings that i can't supress. These are the feelings are
Straight from this heart of mine. I wish that I could stand
By your side. To be there with you when you need me. But
I just want you to know that when I'm not there with you.
I'm there in the sky. I'll become your favorite star that shines
Bright in the sky. I'll light your path at night, I'll protect
You with all the star beams that I have. And at night, when
you smile or you get sad, I'll be there
By your side, always, froever, and a day. I'll never forget about
You. You're the missing piece of my heart. I love you always. This
I promise, and telling to that
Shooting star

[Zepher Tensho]

[AkaiHinata]

awe thank you babe. i wrote it for you

[Zepher Tensho]

[AkaiHinata]

~giggles~ glad you like it

[AkaiHinata]

My reflection in the mirror,
showed only half of myself.
Something was missing,
something that was important
to who i was going to be.

On days when the sun
shined. I felt no warmth
upon my skin. I tried
to find a reason, but no
reason had appeared.

Years passed, my reflection
hasn't changed. Nothing I did
felt like it was full. It
had a half-hearted feeling.

Never feeling truly happy
Never feeling truly sad
It was like that half of
what I am was missing.

It wasn't until I had met
you that the feeling of being
half empty being to fall away.
I didn't notice at first.

It was like the sun was slowly
beginning to shine brighter and
warmer upon my skin.

It was when I was with you that
I finally felt truly happy.
So happy that I couldn't stop
smiling. And
when you weren't by my side, my
heart felt so sad; that I felt like
I would cry.

Now when I turn and face the mirror,
I no longer see only half...

But a full reflection stares back
at me.


~~~Half of a Reflection by Katie Pasker a.k.a Me

[AkaiHinata]

Her world came spiraling
down as flames burned
out over time. She couldn't
believe that they were gone.

Her husband and her
two children, her whole life
vanished in an instant.

They told her that the plane
crashed into the ocean.
No survivers... no survivers...

echoed in her head.

The photo ablum lays on the
coffee table. Faces smiling
up, not knowing it wasnt
going to last. Now know the
perfect world would just
a dream that was meant to fade.

She lays there in the early
morning light, hoping it
was just a dream.

After no noise is hear, she
breaks down and sobs.
She cant live without them..
How can she? She wishes
they could be with them. She

wishes she could be dead.

Days, months, and
years pass. and she cant even
rememeber their voices.
They stay in the back on
her mind. now she has
her new family.

Her old family stays in
that old photo album, laying
on the coffee table. Their
faces smiling not know that
their world will come to an
end. And their perfect
world will shatter...

~Sad Song By me

[AkaiHinata]

She always feels like she
gets in everyones way. Hate
to get in the way. To atone,
she acts nice to everyone.

She yells at her mother because
her mother doesn't listen. Her
father is never around, not
caring for anyone but himself.
Her brothers punch and hurts
her without any remorse.

She thinks its all her fault
for everything that happens
to her. She atones by being
loving to everyone else.
Trys to buy things to make up
for all the guilt she has.

But her heart still aches and
stays broken. Nothing puts a
real smile on her face. The smile
causes her nothing but pain. It
hurts for her to smile. Hurt to laugh.
Hurt to do anything.

She suffering quietly,not
letting anyone to know. When it
shows, "I'm just tired." she says.
But only tired of lying. She
trys to atone for everything.

But it isn't enough. It will
never be enough for her.

~~~Lying by me

[AkaiHinata]

The violin knows
the story of its
owner.
Each note carrys
the emotion of
the song as well
as the person.
It can tell how
a person could be
happy or sad.
It knows as the bow
plays against the strings
and the fingers
that play against the
fret board. Just
by the sound it makes.
When played carefully
and full of love,
the sound can sound
as beauitful as
the ocean.
The music can speak
for the artist, but
the violin speaks
the voice of the
the one behind the
the mask.

~the voilin by me

[Zepher Tensho]

Just put them all in one post you'll get in trouble for quadruple posting O_o

[Ristau]

It's her Literature topic, making her entitled to Post however many times... (I think...) Anywways, Nice Poems Katie

[Shu]

You can post multiple times in a row if you're updating a gallery like this, but it still would be a good idea to have a couple poems in one post.

Nice Poetry, BTW.

[Tsuki-Hime]

Eh, the first one could use a review in spelling, I'm not a grammar Nazi (I don't think) but when (I'm reading emotional poetry and I find an "i" not capitalized, or have to pause for a second to convert covey->convey it detracts from the value)

Nice poetry though, nice and pretty.

[AkaiHinata]

Sorry about the multi posting. And about the spelling, but glad you like it

[Riadansen]

Amazing, simply amazing!

[AkaiHinata]

This is a song that I attemped to write... it went with this piano piece i was also writing... ya i dont think its that good. but here it is.

My Love

Before I met you, I hated
everyone in the world. I went
through life not trusting or asking
for help

But after knowing you I realized that I
can't give up on the world. There are
many things that are important
to me

Chrous

The dreams we dreamed. The hopes
we hoped for. It all seem for nothing.
But why can't dreams and reality
bring happiness to our lives?
Can't you see they are beautiful
connected together.

Yesterday is already over
and here we are. Standing in the rain.

I can see you're trying not
to cry. Am I not trustworthy enought
for you?

It's okay to cry. You
can cry on my shoulder. Don't
be shy. Arent we best friends?

Repeat Chrous

What happened on that night
when the fireworks lit up the sky.
That still remains in
my heart

Repeat Chrous

The two of us chasing our
dreams together. And now we can see how
they are beautifully connected. I will
never forget that shiny moment


This one is just something I wrote....

In the dead of the night
a girl, you will see.
She's waiting in the pale
moonlight.
Forever to wait and hope.
Stars
tell the story all too well
both filled with
sorrow and love.
Starlight
shines upon the hair
that is as black as
a raven.
Eyes,
bluer than the
bluest ocean.
Angry,
time flows by as
she waits.
Chained by time
Chained by her vow.
She waits
hoping to hear a
sound of the one.
But
only to disappear
in the moonbeams.
With a smile
and a
tear.

[Tsuki-Hime]

Interesting to say the least :/

Amusing how most of your work has a tragic, depressing touch to it :?

[AkaiHinata]

Ya i was pretty depressed when I wrote these. ~rubs the back of my head~ it was my depressed state in life. But i dont think i ever wrote a happy poem during this time.... o.O ya im strange

[Dath]

That's pretty good. How long did it take you to write these?

[AkaiHinata]

all these were written over the course of three years. i have over 300 poems written on my laptop. Of course even more in notebooks, and over my school books. ^.^