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[DH_Ninja]

http://img197.images...tekunfamily.png

Took a long while to make. I'd appreciate some comments, hopefully later, i'll go into summurizing each character

Name: Darrius (Last name unknown)
Class: Mamkute
History: Darrius originated from the distant continent of Akilau, born into a family of Mamkute. At the time of his birth, Mamkute were a rare thing, they were few and far between. They lacked a nation on the continent or a true place to live due to feuds between other families of Mamkute and a lack of a favorable climate. On this continent, they became nomads for the most part.

Darrius grew, and eventually left his family of his own free will after realizing how much stronger he was then them. As the years continued, he simply became stronger and stronger. He desired to test his strength, he sought out strong warriors. Along the way for his search, he met Lilith, impressed with her strength and vice versa, the two soon fell for each other. Despite the two, being in love there was no official declaration of marriage.

Darrius would one day encounter a knight clad in black armor with glowing red eyes. The two would fight. The battle lasted for hours, and in the end, Darrius emerged victorious. Feeling there was nothing more left for him here, he left the continent, leaving behind a pregnant Lilith. Eventually, Darrius was presumed dead, having never been heard from again.



Name: Nosferatu
Class: Marshal
Race: Unknown
History: Nosferatu is one of four members of a group of otherworldly beings that come from a plane of existence known as the void. Each member of this group has a power of some sort. Nosferatu’s is immortality. Nosferatu has a direct tie to the actual existence of the void, so long as the void exist, Nosferatu shall exist. He simply wanders and does as he pleases following a certain set of values he has established over the course of the years of his existence.

During one of his wanderings on the continent of Akilau, he encountered a mamkute by the name of Darrius, who proceeded to challenge the intimidating being to a battle. Nosferatu fought for hours against Darrius and was defeated. Believing it to be an act of compassion, Darrius “spared” Nosferatu. Nosferatu never heard word again from this incredible warrior. He wanted to dedicate himself to serving such a warrior, though this man disappeared, he heard word of this man’s son. It took him several years to actually locate the child, Kawl. Since that day, he has served Kawl in secrecy.

On one request, Kawl set out to find a rare being that he felt would threaten his ultimate goal and eliminate it. Nosferatu eventually did find this “being” participating in an arena, disguised in a human form. Nosferatu recognized her as a Lucarvi, a human transformed into a supernatural being through interaction with a demonic like parasite known as Arackneu. In rare cases, when they do try to enter a host, it fuses with their very biology, transforming them completely. After a long and arduous duel, Nosferatu emerged victorious, only to have a change of heart and spare the Lucarvi. Kawl, not being pleased with this at all, tried to force Nosferatu to finish the job, but was met with only a cold iron grip around his throat. Kawl backed off immediately.

Nosferatu later played a large roll in the destruction of the Horizon clan. On several occasions, he was ordered to seek out the remaining survivor of the clan and attempt to eliminate him, only to fail each time. He would continue to serve Kawl up until his death. However, even after his death, he still had a fascination with the one he was sent to eliminate, Tekun. He continues to test himself against this “Rival.”

[Seraphinox]

Wow very comprehensive, Looks great. (If I knew what Tekun was it would probably make more sense)

Duke flamberg looks a bit strange...
Enigma has no face...(j/k)
Is it me or is Tania almarise' face a little off? It looks a bit.... iffy.
The eyes on Sho garza as well

Thats my bitching out of the way. Great job.

[DH_Ninja]

Tekun is one of my characters, the one I usually use in most rps i'm in.

[Seraphinox]

You made them all up? Wow really cool, I really like the two nosferatu's

Why havent you joined this RP then http://forums.feshri...topic=1016&st=0

[DH_Ninja]

Almost every character is mine. Ninivia, Althea, Kelik and Rana are not mine.

Also, there rp is filled with very very short post. I don't like that at all. It's not very good. >.> No offense.

[Shu]

This looks awesome. Think you could write a fanfic based on this, or what?

[DH_Ninja]

There's a whole storyline. A very long and huge storyline XD So much so it hsould be an anime.

[Fire Blazer]

^Hahahahah, funniest thing I heard all day. Then again the day has only been 57 minutes.

As I said on AIM, it's great, very comprehensive, very well-made. It takes skill to put together something like this. xP

Can't wait for the summaries. By the way it's "summarizing" xD

If the RP's a problem we could always get something better up but we need people with lots of free time who can lead and manage it besides DH and Felover... we need a 3rd person, and because I don't have the free time to help it can't be me and it has to be somebody experienced. But let's discuss this in the "Site Discussion" forum, somebody make a topic there and we will discuss

[DH_Ninja]

Update

[Felover3]

I swear Xin or Ralph should be part of that off of Nwol or something...

I mean, Xin and Ralph always seem to bump into Tekun, Julius, or Nwol

More on topic: Very extensive, no wonder it took forever to do, geez that's huge. Like one of the FE like ones, but with mostly all your OC's xD

[DH_Ninja]

Give me permission and i'll add Xin to the tree

[Felover3]

You have permission then xD

[Blood Falcon]

Dei's Minerva and Althea Watson look awfully similar...

Side by side comparison:


EDIT: Just noticed that credit was given. My bad.

[Hughes]

Hey, I plan on doin' one of these with my characters... Mind if I use Eton, Tekun and Nwol in it?

Also, very nice stuff! I love the Tekun Mug, best one up there!

[DH_Ninja]

Go right ahead ^^

[Forbz]

If only I had the patience xD I'm not sure if Rana's story has that many people. Just a huge flurry of characters who never last long.
We should have an anime, heh...

I still think it's funny how Rana's head cranes forward =P

[Dath]

I'm confused....shouldn't this be in spriting?

[DH_Ninja]

>.> Don't criticisize what section it is in, just because i used sprites, doesn't mean it goes into the spriting section.

[Dath]

I'm not criticising you, I'm just annoyed because some people feel like they're above other people standards. This isn't drawn or any type of artwork.

And isn't that why the spriting section is there? So that we can put sprites in it?

[DH_Ninja]

It's a visual with a story, however, i'm not posting it in the sprite section, with all the galleries nor the story section. You know, i'm kinda tired of the shit i go through. Honestly. Oh....did you get permission from Dei! Oh, it's in the wrong section! It annoys me that more the three fourths the people who even bother to post are more concerned about this stupid crap then how the actual result is.