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@  acceptance : (12 July 2018 - 05:57 PM) As far as we know, anyway.
@  Fire Blazer : (09 July 2018 - 08:29 PM) ooo, Felover's alive, lol
@  xcrash1998 : (09 July 2018 - 11:33 AM) He will be remembered, our brother in arms.
@  acceptance : (07 July 2018 - 03:35 PM) BUM- BUM- BUUUUUM
@  acceptance : (07 July 2018 - 03:34 PM) And in the end; xcrash1998 never did find out what was up with Felover3. In fact, no one ever heard from either of them again.
@  xcrash1998 : (03 July 2018 - 12:41 PM) Hey man, whats up
@  Felover3 : (03 July 2018 - 01:56 AM) Been a while
@  acceptance : (02 July 2018 - 11:12 PM) In retrospect it's pretty obvious, what with the Johnny Bosch and sword revving, but according to my doctor when I was 12 i have ADD.
@  acceptance : (02 July 2018 - 10:39 PM) Holy shit it just clicked in my head that the guy in the DMC5 trailer is Nero. Neato!
@  kirant : (27 June 2018 - 12:19 PM) Granted, that makes it sound like I have no interest in Fates (and I really don't, outside of a couple characters)...so I guess my hopes are above "fairly negligible" right now.
@  kirant : (27 June 2018 - 12:19 PM) I think I've got higher hopes going in than for Fates. Fates, as soon as the trailer hit, made it pretty clear it was going to eschew an interesting "both sides have points" story for a fairly clear cut "good guys" story and "villain" narrative.
@  Mig64 : (15 June 2018 - 02:36 AM) I'm not really sure how I feel about it, it felt a bit too different, could either work very well or not work at all, no middle ground.
@  Fire Blazer : (12 June 2018 - 10:18 PM) not having super high hopes for it
@  Fire Blazer : (12 June 2018 - 10:18 PM) the names and art are interesting
@  Fire Blazer : (12 June 2018 - 10:18 PM) new FE looks ok
@  Rujio : (12 June 2018 - 09:07 PM) A post on SF refers to "brigade based tiles" and "squad based controls"
@  Mig64 : (12 June 2018 - 07:59 PM) Those generic units following the character give me hope that we can have actual large scale battles instead of turning everything into a glorified skirmish.
@  Mig64 : (12 June 2018 - 07:56 PM) Seems like a very fitting name for the character, then.
@  Rujio : (12 June 2018 - 07:27 PM) oh hey doing more research on that - the "gard" part is in fact cognate with "guard," so Edelgard approximately means Nobility Protector.
@  Rujio : (12 June 2018 - 07:26 PM) (Also, Edelgard is an interesting name - -gard is a common ending for old Germanic feminine given names [think Hildegard] and Edel is German for noble)

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#1 Cecmus

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Posted 07 June 2016 - 04:34 PM

Hi (• ε •)
Sooooo~ after like 1 year of doing nothing I started to draw again.
Guess I will just show some of my stuff here. (better than showing it at deviant with all that furry, super fat girls and feet or the million pictures of undertale ...)
It actually would be really nice to get some critic and other things that could help me~
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*cough* *cough* At the moment I'm trying to draw faces and eyes (<.<) .
Here are some doodles (BIG DOODLES)

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a grill (ignore the german stuff at the side)
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Anotha one (a really quick something)
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Something about comicstyle and stuff...
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I still have two full folders of old crap ...i don't know if someone wants to see that stuff but I would be willing to show it :P
Have a day~



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Posted 08 June 2016 - 01:23 AM

It's not exactly critique, but is the grill not wearing any pants?

As for actual critique the first thing I looked at in the first two pictures were the eyes. They're actually pretty good imo. You seem to have a solid grasp on proportions, so I think you've already noticed that the girl's left hand is a bit wonky. The only negative thing I really noticed though was the hair. It doesn't quite fall and flow like natural hair does. I'm not talking about the blockiness either, but rather...Basically the rest of the picture has a little bit of life to it. I can imagine what the movement would look like, but the hair just seems a bit static to me I guess? (side note: I was actually trying to describe this exact feeling to my friend the other day when I asked her to look at my sketches. I couldn't get a life-like feeling in the leaves on a tree)

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Posted 08 June 2016 - 05:26 AM

About the pants : I never finish anything.
So yeah I have a very big problems with hands (if they are little) it's pretty much the next thing I'm going to work on~
Aaand about the hair :mellow: I don't know, I dont like drawing that generic/tipical anime-something the hairstyle I'm using is kinda unique. (But the second girl is actually reallllly blocky)

anyways thanks~ :D



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Posted 19 June 2016 - 04:16 AM

Cool man.
Dave Grohl is rock and roll personified.

Actually a real smart genius man, but I'll never show it.

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Posted 23 June 2016 - 05:56 AM

 

About the pants : I never finish anything.

 

XDDD

 

the protag guy on the left in the bottom spoiler reminds me of a dude from FE... maybe it's the headband, haha. can't tell if they are wearing pants either (probably are), but the facial expressions are funny, XD


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Posted 23 June 2016 - 09:23 PM

( ・ω・)ノ
I didn't really had any time to do anything new but I have old stuff...
 
This is probably the best one I did in the last 2 weeks.
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semi-old
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Well~ I don't know maybe you have something like a request for me or idea? :I
If someone is interested in a lil comic made by my umm "art teacher" : http://generic-kingd...blr.com/page/13
 
Have a Day~
 


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Posted 23 June 2016 - 11:59 PM

Whoa.
Dave Grohl is rock and roll personified.

Actually a real smart genius man, but I'll never show it.

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Posted 08 July 2016 - 10:37 AM

Ever considered coloring your work?


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Posted 22 December 2016 - 12:51 AM

Hey it's me the generic lurker that sometimes suddenly pops up~

 

First of all : Yes, yes I did consider it but never do it cuz I only do little and/or fast sketches.(wow it only took some months to answer that.)

 

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Yep, kinda think that I improved a little bit.

Anyways it's nearly Christmas so umm good luck?

Guess it can't become much worse after all that stuff in the past few days...or just lets say 2016 as a whole.

back to lurking



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Posted 15 January 2017 - 09:12 PM

Oh wow have you impr-

 

*reads line saying you think that you've improved a bit*

 

me too lol

 

some of those designs are pretty unique btw, curious if you just thought them up or had some inspiration for them. the first and fourth ones kinda stuck out to me, to be specific.


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Posted 29 January 2017 - 11:45 PM

One month again hmm, time really flies.

 

Nice of you to say that I have improved, if I look at these now I just cringe away...

 

I actually really like to design own characters, not necessarily how they look like but their personality/story and whatever.

Pretty sure games/anime have a great influence but I try to keep my references at a minimum. (I don't want to feel like a copy cat)

 

yeeeep~



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Posted 20 March 2017 - 09:09 PM

Yep, don't really have anything to say.

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I wish I had a little bit more motivation to draw stuff <-<






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