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#1 arimibn

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Posted 26 June 2012 - 05:30 AM

I was shifting through my old files and found this. What do you think? I'll post an "episode" a day.


Sonic Fighters Ep 1: It All Begins

Announcer: AALLLRIIIGHT!!! Now we're finally at the final round! The contestants have made it far in this year's World Grand Prix! Now it's time for it to start!!! The contestants are as follows :

Sonic the Hedgehog!

Shadow the Hedgehog!

Silver the Hedgehog!

Knuckles the Echidna!

And Amy Rose!


Now the racers will take their positions!

(everyone gets into position)

On Your Mark...

Get set...

GO!!!

(everyone except Sonic & Shadow start running)

Sonic: I think we've given them enough of a head start.

Shadow: Agreed.

Sonic & Shadow: Ready...

Sonic & Shadow:GO!!!

(Sonic & Shadow speed off)

Knuckles: Hey, I might actually win the race!

(Sonic & Shadow speed past him and he gets blown away by the wind)

Knuckles: Awww...

Announcer: In 5th place we've got Knuckles!

Knuckles: GAH!

Announcer: In 4th place is Silver!

Silver: Gotta pick it up!

(Silver uses telekinesis to slow Amy down)

Amy: Hey,stop it Silver!

Announcer: Amy takes 4th and Silver takes 3rd!

This is INCREDIBLE!! Sonic & Shadow are completely tied! Who will win? Who will prosper?? Who will take home the chaos emerald???

(Multiple bombs fall from the sky)

Sonic & Shadow: NOT GOOD!!!!

(Sonic brakes but slides into the bombs while Shadow chaos controls out of the way)

Sonic: *cough* What the heck's going on?!

Eggman: I'm what's going on!

Sonic: I shoulda known...

Eggman: Today is the day that I take over the world! Sonic you would only get in my way,so...

Prepare to die! Metal Sonic, destroy him!

Sonic: Let's do it Shadow!

Shadow: Hmph, just don't get in my way.

Eggman: Shadow will be busy...

Sonic: What are you talking about?

Eggman: Meet Metal Shadow!

(Metal Sonic & Shadow appear)

Knuckles: Time for me to jump in on the fun!

(Metal Knuckles appears)

Amy: I'll help too!

(Metal Amy appears)

Silver: Amy let's team up again!

Amy: Okay!

(Everyone starts fighting)

Eggman: Mwahahahahaha!!! The Chaos Emerald Is Now mine!!

(a fire ball flies at Eggman)

Eggman: It can't be!

(Eggman get's blasted away)

Eggman: Your going to pay for thiiiiisss!!!

(*ding*)

Sonic: I've had enough!

Metal Sonic: You fool! You can't defeat me!

(Sonic starts using spin dash)

Sonic: YES I CAN!!

(Sonic spin dashes toward Metal Sonic)

Metal Sonic: You can't beat me with that silly little spin dash!

Sonic: We'll see about that!

(Sonic goes through Metal Sonic)

Metal Sonic: Impossible....

(Metal Sonic explodes)

Sonic: Yesssss!

Shadow: Grr... you're really starting to tick me off!

Metal Shadow: Hmph,this is supposed to be the ultimate lifeform? What a laugh!

Shadow: That does it!!

Chaos....

Metal Shadow: Chaos...

Sonic:We've gotta get these people outta here!!

(Sonic speeds everyone to safety)

Shadow & Metal Shadow: BLAST!!!!

(explosion)

Shadow: It's over for you.

Metal Shadow: You can't win!

Shadow: Says you! This is where you die!
Chaos... Rift!!

Metal Shadow: Nooooo......

(Metal Shadow get's sucked in)

Shadow: Ha! Faker! No chance to win against me!

Robo Knuckles: Ha,You're a weakling!

Knuckes: GRRR!!!

(Knuckles dodges a punch then uses Deep Impact on Robo Knuckles and he explodes)

Sonic: It looks like your the last one!

(Everyone uses their special attack on Metal Amy)

Sonic: Too Easy! Piece o' cake!

Shadow: Perfect as always!

Silver: That was easy!

Amy: You guys are such losers!

(Blaze walks in)

Blaze: Hey Sonic!

Sonic: Huh?

Blaze: There's trouble in Mobious!

Sonic: What kind of trouble?

Blaze: It's BIG trouble! He's appeared!

Sonic: Everyone,let's move! Shadow you know what to do!

(Someone throws the Chaos Emerald to Shadow)

Shadow: Chaos...
Control!

Narrotor: As everyone speeds off to aid Blaze,they don't realize just how much trouble their getting in. Will they ever make it back alive? Find out in the next script of Super Fighters!

"You'll never forgive me? Like I give a damn."
"You got a jacked up notion of fair play pal...and it's beginning to piss me off."
"Though a fight every now and again does make life a little more interesting...dontcha think?"
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Posted 26 June 2012 - 05:47 AM

Some typos in there (capitalization, there/their/they're and your/you're is specifically what I noticed) but other than that it looks pretty similar to a standard Sonic script. Or, well, before it went all RAINBOOWWW ALIENZ. But we'll see where yours goes.

Some comments...

"Sonic Fighters... grand prix...racers" Sonic "Fighters?" Also, Amy/Knuckles/Silver trying to win against Sonic and Shadow is pretty lol. But it's based on Sonic, so :/ I guess you can justify them pretty well, too. At least for the Sonic world.

Generally, you did a good job at capturing the qualities of the Sonic characters as I remember them. Sonic/Shadow are kind of obnoxiously arrogant, Knuckles is ridiculously gullible, Eggman is terrible at executing plans, etc. The problem I have with this is that Sonic characters generally don't have the greatest character development. A really good fanfic will take what's already there but not be afraid to build on it themselves.

Did you intend this to be script-like? I don't know if you've read much in the way of plays, but that's basically how it's set up- lines and basic stage directions. The problem with that (not saying it's a bad thing necessarily, but it has its pros and cons) is that scripts developed as a tool to produce something greater, not to be read themselves. You lose a lot of the action with that, and Sonic is something that can be very action oriented. At the same time, something more scriptlike is easier to read then a textwall of descriptions.
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Posted 26 June 2012 - 12:37 PM

This is a script. It was the stroyline I mapped out for a sprite project I planned on(but never started)making.

Other than that, thanks Rijuo! XD I didn't think it was that good, cause I wrote it when I was like...13? 14? XD
"You'll never forgive me? Like I give a damn."
"You got a jacked up notion of fair play pal...and it's beginning to piss me off."
"Though a fight every now and again does make life a little more interesting...dontcha think?"
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Posted 26 June 2012 - 11:35 PM

Nice work, dude, keep 'em comming!
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Posted 26 June 2012 - 11:36 PM

NOW FOR EPISODE 2!


Sonic Fighters Ep 2: The fight for freedom

(They warp in the screen)

Blaze: We're here.

Sonic: So exactly what happened?

Blaze: Me and Marine were just enjoying ourselves until word came that a fire had started in town. When we went to investigate all we saw was destruction.

Sonic:...

Blaze: We've got to hurry and save what's left of the kingdom!

(they get to town)

Shadow: How dare he destroy so much of the town!! I'm gonna make him pay!!!!!

Sonic: Shadow, I know you want revenge, but that isn't the best course of action right now.

Shadow: Hmph. We'll help the citizens, but I will be the to take him down, got it!

Sonic: Okay, whatever makes ya happy!

(everyone speeds into town)

Citizen: Look, it's Princess Blaze!

Blaze: Is everyone okay?

Citizen: Most of us are okay, but Black Doom took some people captive.

Blaze: Where is he keeping them?

Citizen: In that big dark fortress over there.

Blaze: Okay, let's go!

Sonic:Okay!

Shadow:So that's where he is...

(Everyone goes toward the fortress)

Black Doom: You people will bait Shadow to me...

Maria: Shadow won't fall for your trick!

Black Doom: I beg to differ! He's on his way right now!

Maria: Shadow...

Shadow: (What's this wierd feeling I'm getting?)

Sonic: We're here!

Knuckles: Let's go!

(they speed into the fortress)

Knuckles: There are gaurds everywhere!

Shadow: Well this will be good training!

(Shadow starts fighting the gaurds)

Sonic: All right! Let's go everybody!

(Sonic starts fighting the gaurds)

Blaze: Since there are about 60 gaurds we'll each take 10.

(everyone starts fighting)

Black Doom: That's right, keep fighting. Your energy will revive him! Hahahahaha!

Maria: Shadow...

Shadow: Chaos... Spear!

Gaurd: Guah!

Shadow: Guess you two are it for me then?

Gaurds: You will be destroyed!

(Shadow starts toying with them)

Sonic: You think you can hit me with a slow attack like that?

Gaurd: Don't get cocky!!!

Sonic: Come on!

(Sonic beats him down)

Sonic: Too easy!

(Sonic starts fighting the other gaurds)

Knuckles: Here I come!

(Knuckles goes berserk)

Silver: 10 gaurds huh? let's see if you can even touch me!

(Silver uses lightwave surge)

Silver: Guess not.

Gaurd: What?! I'm not fighting a weak little girl!

Amy: Weak... little... girl?

(Amy destroys them)

Blaze: Flame of Tequim!

(They all get sucked in)

Sonic: Well,that takes care of that!

Shadow: Let's keep moving.

Black Doom: I'm impressed that you were able to beat so many gaurds!

Sonic: Who?

Black Doom: My dream is about to be realized! You fighting those gaurds has given my beast enough power to awaken!

Shadow: You! How dare you destroy the city!

Black Doom: Not only that!

Shadow: What do you mean?

Black Doom: Tell me does this face ring a bell?

Shadow: Maria!

Black Doom: Yes, she's been in my custody for the past 50 years sleeping until the day you were awakened!

Shadow: Uhhh... Grr... I'll make you pay for this...

Black Doom: Like you can do anything about it!

Shadow: I'll kill you!!!

Later.

(Shadow warps away)

Black Doom: Interesting. Let's destroy the rest of them Shadow Android!

Narrator: Now that Shadow has suddenly left, what will become of the others?
And what will become of Maria?Find out in the next script of Super Fighters!
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Posted 26 June 2012 - 11:45 PM

Now it's SUPER fighters? Wasn't it Sonic Fighters before?

Fight for freedom? Seems like fighting for not-being-destroyed/reveng to me.

Stuff like
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Shadow: How dare he destroy so much of the town!! I'm gonna make him pay!!!!!

Sonic: Shadow, I know you want revenge, but that isn't the best course of action right now.

Shadow: Hmph. We'll help the citizens, but I will be the to take him down, got it!

honestly just felt weak to me. Shadow might be quick to want to kill Doom, but it doesn't seem to me like he would want to do it for the city (he would want to do it regardless of that) and he's more subdued than that talking-wise.

Also the whole "let's kill 10 each!" comes off as "olol we're so awesome."
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Posted 26 June 2012 - 11:48 PM

Shadow becomes a lot more caring and nice after Shadow the Hedgehog, because he remembers the promise he made to Maria. XD

And yes, they are awesome.

Also, *edits title*
"You'll never forgive me? Like I give a damn."
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Posted 07 June 2013 - 10:26 PM

Sonic Fighters Ep 3: The Demon's Revival

(Sonic starts sneaking over to Maria)

Shadow Android: Going somewhere hedgehog?

Sonic: Uh-oh!

(Sonic tries to run away but,Shadow Android , an Elite Gaurd , and Elite Black Arms Soldier beat Sonic up a little)

Elite Black Arms Soldier: Now you're going bye-bye!

Sonic: Ugh...

(Elite Black Arms Soldier gets blasted in the back)

Elite Black Arms Soldier: Ow! Who did that?!

Shadow: That would be me.

Elite Black Arms Soldier: LISTEN UP HEDGEHOG!!! YOU'RE GOING TO DIE!!

Shadow: Not likely. I've seen you fight.

Elite Black Arms Soldier: I'M GOING TO RIP YOU APART!!!!

(Elite Black Arms Soldier charges at Shadow and rips through an afterimage)

Elite Black Arms Soldier: What the?! Where'd he go?!

(Shadow teleports above Elite Black Arms Soldier and smashes him into the ground)

Elite Gaurd: Ka!

(Shadow and Elite Gaurd start fighting)

Shadow: What are you doing Sonic?! Go help Maria!!

Sonic: Right!

(Sonic runs toward Maria)

Elite Black Arms Soldier: Not if I have anything to say about it!

(Elite Black Arms Soldier chases after Sonic)

Shadow: (Sonic!) Chaos... Spear!!!

(Elite Gaurd dodges it)

Elite Gaurd: Ha ya missed me!

(Shadow starts fighting Shadow Android)

Shadow Android: He was aiming for Black Arms soldier!

(Elite Black Arms Soldiernotices)

Elite Black Arms Soldier: What the?!

(Elite Black Arms Soldier speeds up)

Elite Black Arms Soldier: Outta the way!

( He flies right past Sonic)

Elite Black Arms Soldier: DARN IT!! I can't...dodge it...
AAGGHHH!!!

(Elite Black Arms Soldier gets blasted away)

Elite Gaurd: Black Arms soldier... You! Your Dead!!
Take this!

(The gaurd uses an electricating move on Shadow)

Shadow: Ugh!! Agghh!

Shadow Android: Finish him off! I'm Going after Sonic! Oh, and make it hurt!

( Shadow Android leaves)

Elite Gaurd: I bet your feeling pretty stupid right about now! Deep fried hedgehog!
How yummy!

Shadow: Hmph!

(Shadow tranfers the electricity to Elite Gaurd and fries him)

Shadow: Haa!

(Shadow fires 2 Chaos Spears at Shadow Android)

Shadow Android: What the?! I thought you-

(Shadow kicks hims in the chest)

Shadow Android: Haa!

(Shadow Android fires a blast at Shadow)

Shadow Android: Hahahahahaha!!! Wait ,what-

(Shadow kicks him back again)

Shadow Android: I've had enough of this!

(Shadow Android takes out his sword and cuts Shadow)

Shadow: Hm?

(Shadow notices his hair falling)

Shadow Andriod: Ha!

(Shadow Android tries to cut Shadow but he keeps dodging)

Shadow Android: The party's over, hedgehog!

(Shadow catches the sword)

Shadow Android: Who are you?!

(Shadow knocks him away)

Shadow: My name is Shadow. You should never have come here.

Nazo: Shadow, leave him to me!

(Shadow turns around and gets blasted through the chest)

Nazo: What are you waiting for? Go get the other one!

Shadow Android: Yes sir!

(Shadow Android leaves)

Shadow: Your.. supposed to be.. Dead!!

(Nazo blasts Shadow several times)

Narrator: What has happened to Shadow?What will become of Maria?Will they be reunited?Find out in the next script of Super Fighters!
"You'll never forgive me? Like I give a damn."
"You got a jacked up notion of fair play pal...and it's beginning to piss me off."
"Though a fight every now and again does make life a little more interesting...dontcha think?"
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This will not be removed until I finish my Sprite Series. Arim and AJ VS The World Started December 19, 2013 (I actually still haven't given up on this! XD)

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Posted 13 June 2013 - 03:39 AM

Super Fighters ep 4: Nazo returns

Sonic: Maria! Here this will help you feel better.

(Sonic starts to hand her a chao berry)

Maria: Thank You.

( Shadow Android Blasts it out of his hand and it turns to dust)

Shadow Android: Now, now, did you really think that you'd get away?

Maria: Shadow!

Sonic: Don't be fooled! That's a clone of Shadow!

Knuckles: You! You ruined everything!!

(Knuckles starts fighting Shadow Android)

Shadow Android: Ha!

(Shadow Android owns Knuckles)

Amy: Knuckles!

(Amy looks at Shadow Android)

You jerk!

(Amy tries to beat Shadow Android, but gets owned in 2 seconds)

Shadow Android: Now to take care of the rest of them.

(Sonic walks in)

Shadow Android: (Why do I sense so much power from this one?)

Sonic: I suggest you leave this place real quickly. Trust me, you don't wanna deal with me!

Nazo: Oh, but I do hedgehog. I do.

Sonic: Impossible!

Nazo: Shadow Android, perhaps you could do me a little favor. Tell me, what should I do with this hedgehog?

Sonic: Put him down!!

(Nazo drops Shadow then blasts him out of the air)

Sonic: Shadow... no...

(Shadow Android punches Sonic in the face)

Sonic: You're still as twisted as always! Well no more! You've dug your own grave!

Nazo: Really? 'cause after I kill you, I'm going to turn this planet and everything on it into DUST!!

Sonic: No way!

(Sonic powers up)

Nazo: Well, this is getting interesting.

Sonic: I'm glad your amused!

Nazo: I am. But I would like to see the power you used to defeat me last time.

Sonic: Then you won't be dissapointed!!

(Sonic charges at Nazo and punches him in the face)

Nazo: No one disgraces me and lives! Argh!

(Nazo throws Sonic down and they start fighting)

(Sonic knocks Nazo away)

Nazo: Not bad. I'd even say impressive. Yes. I understand why I had so much trouble with you last time. As you know this is my normal state but I found a form beyond it!

Sonic: What?!

Nazo: You should feel privalaged! You will be the first one to witness this form! First you will see! Then you will die! Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!

(Nazo starts transforming)

Nazo: Urgh! Grah! AAAAAAGGHHH!!!!!!!!!!


(Nazo transforms into Perfect Nazo)

Sonic: Whoa! His power is incredible!

Nazo: Yes. Time to die!

RAAAAAAA!!!!

Your mine!

(Sonic dodges him)

Sonic: That was close!

(Perfect Nazo kicks him out of the air then smashes him into the ground)

(Sonic comes out of the ground)

Sonic: I... won't give up!

Perfect Nazo: Hmhmhm! You can't even detect my movements! Just what are you going to do?

(Sonic starts charging up "Sonic Storm")

Sonic: Hya!

(Sonic fires "Sonic Storm")

Perfect Nazo: Hmph!

(Perfect Nazo flies right through it)

Sonic: No way!

(Perfect Nazo kicks Sonic in the face)

Perfect Nazo: Hmph!

(Perfect Nazo knocks him at the ground)

Perfect Nazo: How pathetic.

Sonic: No! I can't give up!

(Sonic starts glowing)

Sonic: I'll end this!

(Sonic turns Super Sonic)

Perfect Nazo: What's this?

Super Sonic: ...

Perfect Nazo: Prepare to die!

(Super Sonic blocks his hand)

Perfect Nazo: What?!

Super Sonic: I've had enough! Who do you think you are, anyway?

Perfect Nazo: If you think you can beat me then you're more naive than I thought. Weak people like you can't change anything! Only the strong can have a say in anything!

Super Sonic: O.k. , then I'll just have to show you my power!

Narrator: Sonic and Nazo prepare for the final battle! Is this the end? Can Sonic survive? And will Nazo ever be stopped?
Find out in the next script of Super Fighters!

Edit: Screw this. I'm just trying to post the whole story here. Lol

Super Fighters ep 5: Nazo's Defeat

Perfect Nazo: Ah yes, so Super Sonic has finally decided to show himself.

Super Sonic: You're gonna pay for this!

Perfect Nazo: We'll see about that, let's GO!!!

(Perfect Nazo and Super Sonic fly at each other and cause a shockwave, then they start fighting)

Super Sonic: Not bad, not bad at all!

Perfect Nazo: I'd say the same about you.

Super Sonic: Now it's time to get serious!

(Perfect Nazo and Super Sonic Charge up and fly at each other full speed)

Perfect Nazo: ...grr...

Super Sonic: ...ugh...

(They knock each other away)

Perfect Nazo: Well... You've definitely improved.

Super Sonic: Well,I'm not one to slack off!

Perfect Nazo: Tell me, Super Sonic, how many rings do you have left?

Super Sonic: (Shoot! That's what I forgot about last time!)

Perfect Nazo: You're in trouble now!

(Perfect Nazo starts charging up an energy blast)

Super Sonic: I gotta get more rings!

(Super Sonic zooms around collecting more rings)

Super Sonic: That should be enough.

(Super Sonic looks up)

Super Sonic: Looks like I'm just in time!

Perfect Nazo: Die!!

(Perfect Nazo fires the blast)

Super Sonic: Haaa!!

(Super Sonic flies at the blast)

Super Sonic: HYA!!

(Super Sonic kicks the blast back at Perfect Nazo then sends a Super Sonic Wind to follow it)

Perfect Nazo: It's OVER!!

Super Sonic: You hurt all of my friends! I won't let you hurt ANYONE ELSE!!!

(Super Sonic absorbs both of the blasts then punches right through Perfect Nazo)

Perfect Nazo: Guuhh...

Super Sonic: You're finished!

(Super Sonic shoots an energy blast right at Perfect Nazo and destroys him)

Super Sonic: *sigh* It's finally over...

(Super Sonic turns back to normal then falls to the ground)

Sonic: I hope the others are alright.

Amy: Hello there!

Sonic: (Of all my friends, Amy has to be the one to find me first)

Amy: Sonic, are you feeling okay?

Sonic: ...zzz...

Amy: Awww... Sonic looks so cute when he's asleep.

Knuckles: Hey look! There's Sonic!

Tails: Sonic!

Blaze: Sonic!

Sonic: Everyone's all right...

What a relief.

Maria: Where's Shadow?

Sonic: I'm sure he's allright, but knowing him, he'll probably pop up when we least expect it!

Shadow Android: Hahahahaha!

Sonic: When I was talking about Shadow popping up, this isn't what I meant.

Shadow Android: You're going to pay!

(Shadow Android gets hit by chaos torrent)

Shadow Android: Guh!

(Shadow Android dies)

Shadow: I warned you,didn't I? I'm the ultimate lifeform, Shadow The Hedgehog!

Maria: Shadow!

Shadow: Maria!

(Shadow and Maria hug)

Sonic: Look's like there was a happy ending after all!

Narrotor: So Nazo has been defeated, Maria and Shadow Reunited, but this isn't the end of Super Fighters! Watch the story unfold in the next Saga of Super Fighters!

And this is the point where it wasn't touched again. So now I start posting my new story that I'm currently writing that I actually care about somewhat. Lol
"You'll never forgive me? Like I give a damn."
"You got a jacked up notion of fair play pal...and it's beginning to piss me off."
"Though a fight every now and again does make life a little more interesting...dontcha think?"
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