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#41 Blue Leafeon

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Posted 24 September 2016 - 04:24 PM

I'd actually prefer older Marici have slightly darker skin than the young. Basically, she's lived underground most of her life, and I figured she'd probably get slightly tanner if she'd been outside for some time. I think I might have it, but I'm not quite sure.

 

https://gyazo.com/3c...c7e5b98d41e4a39

Then give the younger one the older one's skin, and give the older one darker skin. The older one's skin tones are perfect for "sickly pale" but the younger one just...doesn't synchronize.


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#42 Zelkami

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Posted 27 September 2016 - 09:56 PM

There are still some very minor errors here and there, but overall, I'm satisfied with what I'm presenting.

 

http://i.imgur.com/c09Ud78.png

 

EDIT: Some new ones.

 

http://i.imgur.com/SzSUxUi.png


Edited by Zelkami, 28 September 2016 - 08:22 PM.


#43 Blue Leafeon

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Posted 30 September 2016 - 07:27 PM

@ new sprites: Is that a tattoo on the lion maned girl?


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#44 Zelkami

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Posted 30 September 2016 - 10:04 PM

It's supposed to be yes. I'm still working on it, but I'd rather not remove it because it makes the arm look huge if it's not there.



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Posted 01 October 2016 - 11:24 AM

I would suggest making it a color other than black. I really don't see how that arm can be huge, though. XD


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#46 Zelkami

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Posted 01 October 2016 - 12:43 PM

t's some kind of optical illusion. The tattoo distorts the perspective somewhat. This is what she looks like with no tattoo.

https://gyazo.com/f6...8a0b67f2b4a86e1

 Maybe you don't see it, but it just looks really odd to me.

 

Anyway, more!

 

http://i.imgur.com/E9YlJOg.png

 

One thing to point out, the Sonia look-a-like is still being worked on in the coloring and shoulders area.



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Posted 01 October 2016 - 01:45 PM

It's the difference between her near shoulder and her far. Her far shoulder looks WAY smaller.

 

Both the sonia lookalike and the purple girl next to her have really wonky hair. Everything looks way too jagged, and the colors aren't smooth at all. Sonia lookalike kind of looks like you used a mouse to draw that hair coming down in the front. As someone who does all of her digital art with a mouse, I know what mouse-drawn lines look like haha


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#48 Zelkami

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Posted 01 October 2016 - 02:17 PM

You're sort of right. The part that comes down the front is a mishmash of Guinevere, Natasha, and Ingrene. I had to erase and fill some parts in by hand like how you said.



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Posted 04 October 2016 - 07:40 PM

A couple of updates: http://i.imgur.com/IlWYCpp.png



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Posted 15 October 2016 - 10:19 PM

young marici looks like her cloak and her hair aren't shaded at all.


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#51 Zelkami

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Posted 19 October 2016 - 06:07 PM

Probably my last update for a while. I can't seem to find any major issues that need rectifying.

 

http://i.imgur.com/OWYbaL6.png



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Posted 20 October 2016 - 09:42 PM

Franz' helmet is still a little crooked, but eh. You can just say he likes to wear it that way :P


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