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QUOTE (Matt Snow @ Jul 20 2012, 06:22 PM)

Nice mug but the nose looks kinda wierd also the "cloth mask thing" makes his neck look odly straight. P.S. is the hack your talking about the Silver Blade that will be in FEE3?

Yeah, the nose is the hardest part IMO for the cloth mask thing. I'll see if I can improve on that. Though, I'm confused by how you say that the nose makes the neck straight. Could you possibly elaborate on that?

Also, about the hack, it depends on which hack you are referring to. The community hack is the Silver Blade hack that'll be in FEE3, but the other hack that I also refer is not the Silver Blade hack, and as far as I'm concerned, will not be in FEE3.

[Snow]

Ah OK
Sorry if I said it wrong, what I ment is that with the "cloth thing" on his neck looks to straight, like the back of the neck is a staight line, IMO it looks kinda wierd.

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QUOTE (Matt Snow @ Jul 20 2012, 08:22 PM)

Ah OK Sorry if I said it wrong, what I ment is that with the "cloth thing" on his neck looks to straight, like the back of the neck is a staight line, IMO it looks kinda wierd.

Oh okay, then I'll try to fix that up tomorrow.

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Better?

[Snow]

Yeah better. WHat class is he by the way (I'm gessing archer)
P.S. that you can listen to critic speaks very well of you.

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QUOTE (Matt Snow @ Jul 21 2012, 12:42 PM)

Yeah better. WHat class is he by the way (I'm gessing archer) P.S. that you can listen to critic speaks very well of you.

He is in fact an archer, and thanks, I try to listen to critique so I can improve upon what I need to.

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Face mask sits too low on the bridge of his nose. His far shoulder should be more tilted away from the viewer, as it stands it looks incredibly flat because of this error. The hair is also in need of fixing, namely the area where it parts.

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QUOTE (????? @ Jul 23 2012, 06:44 AM)

Face mask sits too low on the bridge of his nose. His far shoulder should be more tilted away from the viewer, as it stands it looks incredibly flat because of this error. The hair is also in need of fixing, namely the area where it parts.

I'm not sure what you mean by where the hair parts, but I'll see what I can do about those areas that you're talking about.

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Was going to enter this one into the Splice Competition, but then I couldn't get the body to work so I just went with regular splicing

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Edited my personal portrait and the one I uploaded yesterday. I feel as if my personal portrait doesn't look right, but the concept of it is correct. Is this what you meant Nickt/Sigma? Also, I still don't completely know what you mean by the parting of the hair.

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For SF's splice competition. Didn't turn out as I had hoped, but oh well. I also edited the one on the right's neck a little bit based on deranger's critique.

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QUOTE (GrandScythe2 @ Jul 23 2012, 02:34 PM)

Was going to enter this one into the Splice Competition, but then I couldn't get the body to work so I just went with regular splicing

This fella looks decent :3

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QUOTE (Lancer @ Jul 24 2012, 02:18 PM)

QUOTE (GrandScythe2 @ Jul 23 2012, 02:34 PM) Was going to enter this one into the Splice Competition, but then I couldn't get the body to work so I just went with regular splicing This fella looks decent :3

Thanks, glad that's the case.

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The one on the left was for the TEB Map competition, but then I got the tileset wrong and I forgot to add water, which was one of the requirements, so I had to change it to the one on the right.

[Snow]

Second one looks good, maybe you should put some trees in the center and definitively try to make the mountain less straight, looks to unnatural. Also you put some of the cliffs backwards... I think .
In the first one you forgot to shade the wall (maybe you put the grass thinking it was shading) the part outside the village looks good but the inside is mayor tile spamming. Also the ruined village looks out of place. Why did you put some with different designs spread around like that?

Sorry if this sounds harsh but the ideas where pretty good and if you work on it you could be pretty good.
P.S. Tell how long you need to finish your map for the contest and I'll see if I can except it .

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QUOTE (Matt Snow @ Jul 25 2012, 04:02 PM)

Second one looks good, maybe you should put some trees in the center and definitively try to make the mountain less straight, looks to unnatural. Also you put some of the cliffs backwards... I think . In the first one you forgot to shade the wall (maybe you put the grass thinking it was shading) the part outside the village looks good but the inside is mayor tile spamming. Also the ruined village looks out of place. Why did you put some with different designs spread around like that? Sorry if this sounds harsh but the ideas where pretty good and if you work on it you could be pretty good. P.S. Tell how long you need to finish your map for the contest and I'll see if I can except it .

I read your post on SF. Thanks for posting it there as well.

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Map I made for the map competition. I won't be making any updates on anything that's been critiqued most likely on my sprite threads until after FEE3 as I will be busy helping a few groups.

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