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#61 Lancer

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 07:13 PM

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The feet are too big an ugly looking. Try working on them and making them less swollen.


Clearly Inari is a human and should go by human rules of anatomy.

She's humanoid buddy. That means that the body is still mainly proportional to what a human would be.


The back of the foot is equivalent to 1/2 the size of your face. Inari's foot does just that. Learn your proportions.

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 08:58 PM

The tails look really well-done, as do the ears; great job on those. One thing that bothers me a little is the size of the nose and it looks like the face is a little scrunched up, perhaps due to a combination of the nose, the large anime-like eyes, and some other things, but if you like that sort of anime-style and are confident that it looks good, then you prob don't need to change a thing, I just personally don't find it very appealing.

Anyhow, keep up the good work.

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 10:21 PM

I think the foot looks like that cuz of perspective/what she's wearing. To me it doesn't looklike a bare foot o3o so...yea..
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Posted 21 January 2013 - 10:31 PM

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Pffft some parts didn't scan as I had hoped. UHASKDJASLDJ THE BOTTOM SHADING IS SO MUCH WORSE THAN THE TOP.


No, it's not. :/

Anyway, your work is really good, Lancer. Keep it up.



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Posted 21 January 2013 - 11:38 PM

QUOTE (Zepher Tensho @ Jan 21 2013, 03:21 PM)
I think the foot looks like that cuz of perspective/what she's wearing. To me it doesn't looklike a bare foot o3o so...yea..


Yeah she's wearing socks lol.

Thanks for the encouragement and the <founded> critique smile.gif It's useful stuff hehe.

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 11:52 PM

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I think the foot looks like that cuz of perspective/what she's wearing. To me it doesn't looklike a bare foot o3o so...yea..


Yeah she's wearing socks lol.

Thanks for the encouragement and the <founded> critique smile.gif It's useful stuff hehe.


Nyaha~! Told ya~

I tend to do that too, using clothes to hide fail anatomy. But lately I'm pulling away from it. I draw all my characters nude to begin with to help the clothes look more natural fitting. But I still suck at hands and feet ;w;
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Posted 22 January 2013 - 12:07 AM

QUOTE (Lancer @ Jan 21 2013, 06:38 PM)
Thanks for the encouragement and the <founded> critique smile.gif It's useful stuff hehe.

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Granted, mine was all negative, but usually I only talk of the negatives, as they're the only barrier between what something is and what it can be. If you'd like, I can try to be more positive-focused.

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 11:57 PM

dude, awesome shiz! you take requests?!!!!1!!!

I have this hack called The Last Promise and one of the characters is Kelik

I was wondering if you could draw him

you can find his portrait in the game and stuff

it'd be soooooo cool!!! thx!!!

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 12:05 AM

QUOTE (Blazer @ Jan 23 2013, 04:57 PM)
dude, awesome shiz! you take requests?!!!!1!!!

I have this hack called The Last Promise and one of the characters is Kelik

I was wondering if you could draw him

you can find his portrait in the game and stuff

it'd be soooooo cool!!! thx!!!


Lol. I usually don't take requests or fulfill them, but okay. I have a lot on my plate at the moment, but for sure when I have time cool.gif

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 07:43 AM

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Something feels wrong... I need to start drawing on a flat plane to not mess up my perception. Guess I'll need to be more careful in the future.

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 09:30 PM

Hey dude, this stuff is pretty good. I like your style, for real.
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Posted 24 January 2013 - 10:09 PM

Looks good! Keep it up.

I'm not very good at art critique... But that was still my honest opinion.

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Posted 28 January 2013 - 05:52 AM

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Good. Now draw AJ.
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Posted 28 January 2013 - 06:02 PM

Reminds me of this guy:
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Posted 28 January 2013 - 06:14 PM

I really like the details on his coat and the chain attached to his pants smile.gif

Proportions look good and the only thing I would suggest is maybe put some wrinkles in the pants.

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Posted 28 January 2013 - 07:17 PM

The face looks a little squished but other than that great job.

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Posted 28 January 2013 - 08:44 PM

IMO, his nose is too square, and again, his feet don't look that long, but otherwise, great job! I love the coat and boots.

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 06:20 AM

Style testing. Not set in stone yet, still got a long ways to go. But so far I've found this new style to be much more efficient, and cleaner too due to the certainty involved with it (Math is useful!). In addition, it actually kind of looks nicer heheh (at least imo)...

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