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[Dath]

Very first chapter. Enjoy!

Chapter 1; The Beginning



?- It's quiet here...

??- Yes....quiet and peaceful.

?- I like it here.



???- You guys shouldn't be here. It's dangerous to be outside in times of war.

?- Hm! Oh, it's just Jed.



Jed-...You should go in Judas. You too, Elise.

Elise- If you say so, brother.

Judas- Let's go, Elise.



Jed- The war...starts up. Let's hope it never comes to this peaceful little island, eh?



Noblemen- Things....must go perfect. Hey! You there!



?- Hm? You talking to me?

Noblemen- Yes, yes, you are the captain, are you not?

Captain- Aye. Do you need something?

Noblemen- How soon until we arrive?

Captain- About three days. Why?

Noblemen- I just wish to be on track of everything. Thank you.



Captain- What did you get from that?

Thief- Not much. He doesn't wish to cause us harm, but there's something that blocks my mind from his every time I attempt to enter that specific part. He's hiding something, that much is clear.



Captain- Anything to do with the war?

Thief- It has everything to do with it.

Captain-....this is bad news. I have a bad feeling about this....

[Holy Kensai]

Wow. Nice job. Seeing as how I have ever seen the Thief's face before, I'm going to assume it's a custom and congratulate you on that too. (Y) Keep it coming.

[Dath]

Eh...no. The thief's hat comes from Joshua, and the thief's head comes from...F...F....F...Forde! And the body is....Legault(?) with a shoulder guard.

WARNING!

Expect a chapter tomorrow!

[Holy Kensai]

Whoops. Never* And I meant custom as in you made it.

WARNING

I'll check back tomorrow.

[Dath]

Face, there.

[Holy Kensai]

lol Alright, I may need to clarify? I meant face as in all of it put together, the face portrait or whatever people call them.

[Dath]

It's just Forde's head, with a hat on it, and the ponytail cut off. I didn't do any custom work.

By the way...it's tomorrow my time.



Chapter 2; Of Mysteries and Men



Captain- This war is...troubling. Pirate raids are increasing...bandits attack without fear...what in the world is King Harling thinking?



?- Stop him! Do not allow his to pass!

??- Seize him!

???- Oh, no. Oh, no, oh, no, oh no!



Thief- I've got into his head, captain!

Captain- Vale? What is it?

Vale- That man we shelter in this ship....the noblemen is evil. He wishes to corrupt the island with the forces of evil, and spread the influence of the war to the peaceful island we travel to now.

Captain- That must have been why he wanted to get here so badly....



Noblemen- I bring news! The King has ordered me to arrest the two of you on basis of treason to the noble Harling Empire!

Captain- What!?

Noblemen- Please, do not resist. It will be more fun this way.



Captain- Gah!

Vale- This is not good....not good at all.



Fighter- Hmph! Looks like the Captain and ol' Vale got captured. Now....when to come to their aid....?



?- You there! Get back to work.

Fighter- Right away, sir.



Jed-....where is the blacksmith's shop again...? Father asked me to purchase a new blade....where is it...? Gah, this is useless!

*Crash!*

Jed- Bwaah!! The ground cracked by my feet! Is this the sign of an earthquake!? Gotta get home....



Man- ....So it's true. The elements are here indeed. It is as his majesty said.



Senator- Milord Arwall, I must see the king immediately.

Arwall- Now, now, Orwell, we both know that the king is far too ill to talk to peasants like you. I speak for the king, now.

Orwell- Grr....for now, perhaps.



Arwall- Gah...gwahahahahahhaha! Yes, the King's mysterious "illness" was a little sudden. The fools have no idea what is happening. The orders from the King are my own! Soon....I will rule all of the Harling Empire!

[Holy Kensai]

Any editing/splicing is custom.

I like it, quite dramatic, switches scene a lot, but that reminds me of movies, so yeah. Leon looks so awesome, why is he always the evil guy? :/

[Dath]

Because he's got an evil face.

But what I did was splicing. Quite different from customing. I'll show you customing...one minute....



One of the many custom BA mugs. See the difference?

[Holy Kensai]

I know, that's why he's so cool.

And alright, I'll them different things then.

[Dath]

Alright. Just got the next chapter done, but I'm going to wait until morning to post them. Night.

[Holy Kensai]

It is morning for me. Rawr. Please post them for I am waiting,

[Dath]

Lol, alright.

Chapter 3; Attack!



Jed- Whew! Shopping's all done! I'm still worried about that tremor in the town square though...



?- Yeah, that's him...now....the best way to deal with him would be to....



??- Thank you for your kind hospitality, good sir.

Villager- It's no problem. I saw the young boy you were looking for about ten minutes ago, heading east.

??- Thank you very much.



??- Now to the east....



?- Now, to strike.

Jed- It's getting really dark out tonight....much darker than any other night. I wonder why....



??- Look out behind you!

Jed- Huh?



??- I'm....not going to make...it.



Jed- Gwaah!

?- Hehehehe....it's far to easy to defeat small village rats like this. I desire a better challenge.



Jed- Ah...I blocked the attack, but I lost my sword. If this strike hit's me, I'm doomed...

?- Farewell, young element master.

Jed- Element...?



?- Die!

??- Not if I can help it!



?- Wha....

??- Your blade shall not pass through me. Flee back to your master, now!

?- Grr....



?- I'll flee for now, girlie. But you better be careful. My master doesn't like being messed with. Neither do I.



?- Next time, I will get you.



??- Whew...he's gone.

Jed- Who...who are you?



??- The better question is, who are you? Tell me everything about you. I need to know why these guys are after you.

Jed- Alright...well, I was born in a small colony on the fiery mountains of the Alder Range....



Fighter- The timing....is still not right. Too many soldiers. Maybe at port....possibly.



Vale- Hey, Captain, what's going to happen to us.

Captain- Unless we get out of here, we're probably going to be executed.

Vale- Oh....that makes me feel better.



Arwall- Good evening, your majesty.

Harling- ....*Cough* Arwall...what have you done. It pains me to think, breathe, or anything else. What kind of poison have you infected me with!

Arwall- Don't worry, your majesty. The pain will pass soon, but in the meantime, I'll take good care of your kingdom..Hahahahahahahaha!

Harling- My...sons....will figure it out.

Arwall- Oh, I doubt that. Assassins are on their way to them, as we speak.

Harling- My sons...will not die by foul assassins. Just as I will not die from this poison!

Arwall- Back to bed, your majesty! You must get your rest...

Harling- I...I...errggraaah! Yes, perhaps bed is where I shall go. I must get my rest, after all.

Arwall- Brilliant suggestion, your majesty.

Harling- I will not forget your service to me, Arwall. You will be paid your just rewards.

Arwall- I know I will, your majesty. I know I will....

[Holy Kensai]

Hm. The images are all moved/deleted. In the interest of not getting confused when reading it, I'll wait until it's fixed before I do.

[Dath]

Gasp! *Reworks..*

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Done and fixed. =)

[Holy Kensai]

You're really pumping these out, and I'm glad I waited.

I still like the story, and it still has those dramatic twists and turns. And it seems safe to assume the two stories will meld together at some point, it'll be interesting how.

[Dath]

What two? Lol, there's three.

[Holy Kensai]

That's what I meant. lol Whoops.

[Dath]

lol, new chapter tonight(possibly.)

[bblues]

Nice work, I like it. Keep it up