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#1 Solace

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 02:22 AM

The sun blinded me for most of my venture through the woods, as I staggered across vines using only intuition to find my way. My chest was like a furnace, constricted with only a thin passageway for air. Each breath grated against my throat as I yearned to stop, but couldn't. I knew I was being followed. I could feel my mind mangling into knots of misconception. My foot tangled around a fallen limb. I caught myself on the trunk of a tree, and as I looked up through the shade of the foliage, I felt the relief I had been longing for.

It was a beige tower that loomed above me.

With a giant clock and an archway so grand,
It beckoned me.
I recall its rough bricks as I grazed
Over them in my run from terror
And the way the light glimmered
On the intricate stained class windows,
The medieval style so elegant and bright.

Oh, how I remember that oak wood of
The pews that were once my hiding place,
Sometimes even my extended home.
Without any blankets,
It managed to provide warmth.
Lacking any food,
It succeeded in keeping me alive-
My shelter, my sanctuary, shielded from
The mass genocide of my world.

I recall gazing out its window
Into the gory night, shaking with fear and tears
Hoping to stay hidden and not be taken
It contained all my thoughts and hopes
Never revealing, sworn as it was to secrecy,
Not only to my emotions but to my residence
My own personal diary
My own personal sanctuary.

But I left it all behind. The forces now rage within me against deception's icy blast. Opposition will never die; there will always be a contrary opinion. A set of iron shackles ominously awaits the wrists of the nonconformist. Regardless of risk, I will stand against the disillusionment that aims to drag me into darkness and fire. I have abandoned my sanctuary, my safe haven. Rebellion burns strongly like a festering wound, a secret warmth. If I ever want to see a change in my world...

It's truly the only way.

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#2 Scrimsax

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 02:55 AM

Deeep man. Seriously though, this is really cool.

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#3 Mikki

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 02:57 AM

Deep indeed....you really have a knack for literature, huh?


Keep it up.

#4 Nice Middle

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 04:01 PM

I can't wait to read more.
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#5 Golden Warrior

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 07:38 PM

That was an amazing read... Keep it up!

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#6 Kingultra

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 08:29 PM

It's really good. I like it
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#7 Solace

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 08:59 PM

Thanks for the feedback, guys. It really encourages me to start writing again / more often.

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#8 Fire Blazer

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 04:16 AM

Wow, I'm such a bad writer >________<

Seriously, I have a lot to learn from you, Solace O_O

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