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#1
Posted 14 July 2013 - 08:05 AM
#2
Posted 14 July 2013 - 02:18 PM
The armor girl's left eye seem's a bit too far from her nose, and her neck seems a little too thick.And she's missing a half-eyes frame
the third girl's face on the left side could use some shading i think. Because right now it goes from her lightest skin shade to her hair with nothing in between. And it looks like her outline for her hair disappears. and her half-eyes frame, her right eye is just blue lol
The green armor guy's neck seems too shaded to me. And his right eye looks asleep. His half-eye's frame looks too green to me. Also, where did you get the green armor? it seems pretty saturated to me (like you picked it from paint, and not another mug.)
the next brown clothed girl is missing a half-eyes closed frame. And her outline seems a bit too think in the neck.
The next girl's mini mug is that of the official mug you're gender-swapping.
The last 2 are decent, but the last girl's mouth seems hard to find.
Try to think of realistic proportions for your mugs and make sure things make sense. I don't know how well that translates into mug splicing, but that's what I do when I make sprites.
These aside, I like these mugs. Not bad at all for your first time! Better than me lolol
#3
Posted 14 July 2013 - 10:32 PM
#4
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:12 AM
Keep practicing and showing, best of luck!
Signature thanks to Shu.
#5
Posted 16 July 2013 - 03:28 PM
Images - 11/22 Writing - 5/17 FE: Immortal Shrine
Need help with hacking? Post in the subforum, or Skype me (smashedfish76).
#6
Posted 21 July 2013 - 06:21 AM
I've definitely tried to work on some of the things that you told me to. Unfortunately, some of it didn't work out as well as planed, so for the sake of space, I took out the sprites I didn't do any revisions on.
Again, I'm sorry I couldn't fix a couple things (mainly the middle guy's eye and blinking frames, and the first girl's blinking frame)
Any critique on these are also welcomed!
#7
Posted 08 August 2013 - 09:30 PM
#8
Posted 09 August 2013 - 05:07 AM
#9
Posted 10 August 2013 - 04:44 AM
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take a few more liberties on stuff like the hair and armor (to make it more unique) and try to work on cleaning up sprites when it comes to making the shading nice, connecting pieces, refining eyes, etc. |
#10
Posted 15 August 2013 - 04:05 AM
And thank you everyone for the wonderful feedback!
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(though I have a personal strong dislike for Ross's neck and have made a point to never use it in any splice ever.) |
trust me, I understand... that is the last splice with anything from Ross I'm ever doing. Period.
#11
Posted 12 October 2013 - 02:08 AM
(Mia has no blink frames because her base face is Elen and I didn't feel like making frames for it because I'm lazy.)
#12
Posted 12 October 2013 - 03:17 PM
#13
Posted 12 October 2013 - 10:22 PM
#14
Posted 13 October 2013 - 06:57 PM
And YakYak, I could do that. It'll just take some time to find a pair that looks natural.
#15
Posted 16 October 2013 - 01:53 AM
Added Mia's blink frames and the beta Sheba version
#16
Posted 16 October 2013 - 03:40 AM
-Jenna's sprite is great, though if you were looking for something to improve, I'd recommend removing the hair from her eye.
-Mia's hair shading at the back could possibly use work, as it doesn't look correct to me at a glance. Perhaps someone else should weigh in on this, because it's been a while since I used to sprite regularly, but the jagged pattern of the shading seems weird.
-Sheba's coming along quite nicely. If anything, I would recommend removing some of the pooled black areas from her clothes, reworking her left eye from our point of view, and removing the part at the top of her hair where there's a two pixel thick border by coloring in the bottom layer of pixels with her hair colors.
As a reviewer, I try to focus on things that could use work, rather than emphasizing the parts of sprites that were really well done, so don't take my criticism too harshly! Your sprites are absolutely excellent for someone with as little spriting background as you have, and in fact, I might request a few sprites from you at some point, if you'd be okay with that.
Images - 11/22 Writing - 5/17 FE: Immortal Shrine
Need help with hacking? Post in the subforum, or Skype me (smashedfish76).
#17
Posted 17 October 2013 - 01:22 AM
I did as you said, though please ignore both the lack of a revised Jenna, and Sheba's sloppy blink frames. I promise they look okay in game (somewhat). Also, that's Piers, but I don't know which color to use for the head-cloak thing he has, so any help or recommendations would be awesome.
#18
Posted 17 October 2013 - 07:46 PM
#19
Posted 19 October 2013 - 06:57 PM
Check out my FE7 hack: The Hope of Another
Make sure to look at my FE8 Sequel as well: The Sacred Bonds
#20
Posted 21 October 2013 - 03:52 AM
@Ghaststation Yeah, ik, I just decided to scrap that sprite and start over. He's supposed to be Piers from Golden Sun, so that's why he has the weird head cloak thing, and I don't know why he wears it..
@MattCustov I'm not sure if or when I will be making a Golden Sun hack, but my friend and I are thinking about it. I'll let everyone know if/when I will be making it.
and now, Lalum (or something):
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