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#21 Tsuki-Hime

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Posted 22 November 2009 - 05:32 AM

Oh my god you stole my work >_> I'm calling the cops and suits to arrest you!

Can't really say how good it is since I don't know how much you used from my corrections, (not that I mind) however the right side of the hair is done a bit iffy.

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Green: I'm going to kill you! What did I say about different colors? Use the same border color before I break your bones! (Jk, I hate it when I miss those too >_<)

Whatever you did, you're definetely getting better, so keep it up happy.gif

As for originality, screw it xD Common sense to get the basics down before attempting something which is to "wow" the masses. I don't know about others but I've stuck mainly to altering the face, usually a pre-made body is adequate. Until you get better at least anyway.

As for unnatural, I think Blood might have been referring to the eye in general, not the eye color, if not then his critique is pretty lacking in description. Either way I disagree, the eye looks fine, and the eye color doesn't look too bad. (Yes it would look better in a different color, but so what?)

And if we're complaining about people with red eyes.... well Nino was green hair go whine at the makers that FE characters are unnatural xD

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Posted 22 November 2009 - 05:38 AM

QUOTE (Tsuki-Hime @ November 21, 2009 09:32 pm)
As for originality, screw it xD Common sense to get the basics down before attempting something which is to "wow" the masses. I don't know about others but I've stuck mainly to altering the face, usually a pre-made body is adequate. Until you get better at least anyway.

As for unnatural, I think Blood might have been referring to the eye in general, not the eye color, if not then his critique is pretty lacking in description. Either way I disagree, the eye looks fine, and the eye color doesn't look too bad. (Yes it would look better in a different color, but so what?)

By the eye critique I meant the eye in general, it doesn't flow with the rest of the mug whatsoever.
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Posted 22 November 2009 - 11:28 PM

Well even though most of this probably has a few color errors, I simply did this one just for teh lulz

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I'm still looking into how to recolor that blue area Tsuki pointed out, but I got that green part done.

These are three drafts I wanted people to judge.

EDIT: Draft 1: Belt done in green so as to not get the belt and hair mixed up.
Draft 2: Done with Karel's eye to give him that sorta "older" aspect to him.
Draft 3: Simply just my original before 1 & 2

lolz. I know it's supposed to be a gallery, but I gotta get my colors right before anything can go on. tongue.gif

EDIT: I know I have to redo the color on his shoulder plate, but I just CAN'T get it coordinated right. sad.gif

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Posted 22 November 2009 - 11:45 PM

Long hair + Male + armor= suck IMO. Change his hair, right now it doesn't flow with the rest of the mug. Also, the neck shading is bizarre. Take the brown thing on his shirt( not jacket) off, it doesn't look very good and it's kind of random and add some shading to the shirt.
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Posted 23 November 2009 - 03:42 AM

QUOTE (Bloodfalcon22 @ November 22, 2009 06:45 pm)
Long hair + Male + armor= suck IMO. Change his hair, right now it doesn't flow with the rest of the mug. Also, the neck shading is bizarre. Take the brown thing on his shirt( not jacket) off, it doesn't look very good and it's kind of random and add some shading to the shirt.

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Well, I have to agree that the shoulder plate did not go well so I took it out and added Colm's earring, but it seems more....noticable than other earrings I've seen in FE. I didn't like the brown line either so I got rid of it, and tried to add shading because he saw it like I did. tongue.gif

Any OTHER OPINIONS? XD

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Posted 23 November 2009 - 03:58 AM

Hair shading is inconsistant, it isn't flowing correctly, Tsuki explained that quite well.

The skin tone around his eye is still Karels. It's different than the rest of his face and his neck is using one too many skin tones. I count six, FE mugs use five. How the earring is shaded right now, makes it look like a blob, and why is it positioned there? O.o ouch. You should move it. Oh, and there's this other blob at the end of his ear.

Where his hair meets his jacket lacks shading.

I don't neccesarily like the palette but it's still nice. Much better than my first few mugs. When I first started I did much simpler splices and even then they weren't that clean. You my friend are a very good beginner. smile.gif
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Posted 23 November 2009 - 04:11 AM

I think the older eye looked better. The one in the original I think? I unno. I'm not a very good uhh... Judge? Idk. I'm sorta new to this too. I guess. >_> ANYWAYS. I think this is a very nice start. Keep at it. o.o
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Posted 23 November 2009 - 04:42 AM

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This is the final outcome for a very long time until I get the basics down. The only thing I did was change the earring

If anyone has any touch up suggestions, go ahead. =P

Pixel-by-Pixel editing has me exhausted for a night. XD

EDIT: Yes, I stole Linus' Earring. :/

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Posted 23 November 2009 - 06:38 AM

The thing around his right shoulder( left side OPV) is either not the same angle as the rest of the body or or it blends in too much.
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Posted 24 November 2009 - 05:30 AM

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Very last touch-up of this character for now.

I'd like to thank Ecplise40 for helping touch up the colors. He was very flexible to give me three versions and, from what it looks like, even helped touch up the hair! =P

I think I'm done with this for long while.

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Posted 24 November 2009 - 05:35 AM

Wow, turned out nicely. P: Good job.
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Posted 24 November 2009 - 05:49 AM

Those colors help a lot. I'm think the reds could have worked, they were just too light and "pastelle-y" (yeah I make up words on the spot, so what?)
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Posted 24 November 2009 - 07:29 AM

Okay! LAST one this time. PROMISE! XD

I animated it all, just for teh lulz

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Posted 24 November 2009 - 01:55 PM

*blink* *blink*
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FOR TEH LULZ!

Anyways, those frames work well. And this means it's finished!
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#35 Tsuki-Hime

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Posted 24 November 2009 - 02:33 PM

Hmmm? For teh lulz? Something makes me think you're preparing a hack or planning to participate in one Hmm gee you think? Mug sheet not an obvious enough clue for you? Shut up Tsuki2 not talking to you atm, and yes, we are multiplying xD

Anyway good to know you're in the hands of FESh's best spriter now xD (Well at least I think he is anyway) Turned out really nice, good luck with future works.

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Posted 24 November 2009 - 03:08 PM

Good Job. smile.gif I told you blinking/talking frames were easy. Glad you like the colors. Tsuki's right, I AM THE BEST you should partcipate in a hack, it's just really cool to see your character in game.
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Posted 24 November 2009 - 03:59 PM

QUOTE (Eclipse40 @ November 24, 2009 10:08 am)
Good Job. smile.gif I told you blinking/talking frames were easy. Glad you like the colors. Tsuki's right, I AM THE BEST you should partcipate in a hack, it's just really cool to see your character in game.

I would, but I have no idea how to put him in game. If you can help, that'd be great. smile.gif

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Posted 25 November 2009 - 12:32 AM

http://www.feunivers...hp?showforum=46

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#39 Tsuki-Hime

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Posted 25 November 2009 - 12:39 AM

Depends on whether you want to start a hack yourself, or simply join in on one,

Joining one:
-Usually there's an organiser, all you have to do is submit the mugsheet and various tidbits of information they'll request from you. (Name, Class, Affinity, Stats etcetc)

Making one:
-Eh I don't care who disagree's with me but a hack isn't a project you want to start alone IMO. And before people point out the hacks which have been completed, I'd like to point to the pile of hacks that were never finished.
- Either way are you willing to spend countless hours over several months learning and hacking? Since it's definetely not fun for a good portion of the work.

If you just want to replace (example) Lyn in FE7, and change the name, portrait and sprite, you could have it done in less then an hour, (With FEditor and Nightmare)

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Posted 04 December 2009 - 07:49 AM

Two Updates and two help factor:

1st small update: user posted image (His Basic Sprite....editing his sprite animations is....ball-wracking. =____=....and even now I know there is still much to be done with this.... ._.)

2nd (sorta big) Update: [user posted imageHer name's gonna be Rosaline (Rose for short tongue.gif) (His Wife, folks. And yes, Sohpia was used with Tana's hair [When I finished, I noticed that these two were used in the splicing tutorial I read a while ago XD]) dunno how I would get thath older women look though.

As for my help factors, I just need some help with:

1st: Making a mini-mug for Trace

2nd: Editing with Sophia. I just wanna find a decent body for that spellcaster theme. D:




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