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[SomeRandomGuy]

Some critique would be awesome. Thanks in advance.

EDIT: Crap, did I post this in the wrong section? I think I did My bad...

[SomeRandomGuy]

Can somebody please move my topic to where it belongs and may I get some feedback? Someone please acknowledge.

[Fire Blazer]

Sorry our mods are kind of non-existent at this point and people prefer lurking over actually posting, what a great community *shot*

These are all pretty solid splices albeit I can still tell the parts... but part of that is just me seeing the characters way too much haha, some of them have too much a resemblance IMO like the Neimi-headed one since the entire head looks kinda the same, but going left to right, the first, second-to-last, and third-to-last all look pretty cool

As far as critique goes I won't say anything too specific for now, your basic spriting execution seems okay anyway, what I might suggest doing is putting in a bit more spliced parts into your portraits and work on meshing those together--that way your portraits are less recognizable and more unique. Instead of just armor + head for instance, try left piece of armor + right armor + (face - minus eyes) + eyes + 2-3 parts of hair and you might come up with something where a normal person can't tell the parts, haha. Granted it takes a lot more work so I wouldn't really blame you if you didn't want to XD

[JuneoftheMearkat]

Pretty good! Some of these, like the first one, are actually quite good at combining pieces to "hide" where they were originally from, but other ones are a bit too obvious (mostly the girls). I'd suggest taking apart the hair some more and adding other pieces to try and create new hairstyles, which is a good way of differentiating new charas. Palettes overall look decently matched, which is great .