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@  Elwood : (02 May 2025 - 07:37 AM) When it was active, this place was some of the most fun I've ever had on the internet.
@  Elwood : (02 May 2025 - 07:37 AM) Really wish I liked Discord better so I could hang out with you guys again. I just really prefer forums to Discord. :/
@  Elwood : (02 May 2025 - 07:34 AM) Lol Blazer probably just keeping it up so I can leave it as my homepage for Firefox!
@  Valke : (04 April 2025 - 10:57 AM) wow i cant believe this site is still up
@  acceptance : (27 January 2025 - 08:32 PM) You're right, it really is nostalgic. Totally with Shu on that.
@  Shu : (15 November 2024 - 09:50 PM) Right you are
@  Elwood : (01 August 2024 - 03:41 AM) Wow a new post! ....aaaand it's a bot. Still, it's strangely nostalgic.
@  Oblivion Knight : (26 February 2024 - 11:30 AM) Whoa I can edit a typo. The technology.
@  Oblivion Knight : (26 February 2024 - 11:29 AM) Obligatory message.
@  Elwood : (02 January 2024 - 04:19 AM) Happy New Year!!!
@  Aaron : (13 February 2023 - 09:19 PM) I'm still out here alive. If you remember me, I hope you're doing well!
@  Aaron : (13 February 2023 - 09:09 PM) 2023 and this place is still up huhh
@  Elwood : (05 January 2023 - 07:58 AM) Ah a Christmas greeting from Wolfie! Even if I saw it way late Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to everybody!
@  Cero : (31 December 2022 - 09:27 PM) Man that bot went crazy
@  Whitewolf8 : (24 December 2022 - 10:02 AM) I return once more on the eve of Christmas to haunt you all again!... Mainly Elwood. Hello!
@  Elwood : (25 November 2022 - 04:58 AM) A bot! Ah the nostalgia!
@  Elwood : (02 November 2022 - 02:30 PM) Yo ho ho ho! Thar be the white wolf!
@  Whitewolf8 : (24 October 2022 - 12:29 AM) Well, blimey it's been a while. Hoy there! If anyone's still alive here anyway.
@  Valke : (21 April 2022 - 12:12 PM) im taking the 2nd shout of 2022 😂
@  Elwood : (03 March 2022 - 10:12 PM) Mwuhahaha! The first shout of 2022 is mine!

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Posted 19 October 2014 - 07:10 AM

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Posted 19 October 2014 - 11:37 AM

Hey there! I've got a few suggestions for you:

-The colors are a bit oversaturated, IMO. You might want to tone them down a bit.
-The shading is a bit wonky. You might have better luck reversing the light and dark tones of the hair, and the shirt is rather messy. While you're just starting with portraits, it's better to take pre-existing stuff and splice/recolor it than just doing it by yourself.
-The hairstyles you spliced together don't really work with eachother. The hair that isn't Lyn's goes too far on the left side from our point of view, and it should be more of a continuation from her hair on the right side.
-The bow should be redone some so it fits more with the perspective of the sprite.

All that aside, as they say, the first step is the hardest. Good on you for giving it your all, and you can only improve from here on out!

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