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@  Fire Blazer : (23 March 2017 - 05:40 AM) @Leafeon true
@  Fire Blazer : (23 March 2017 - 05:40 AM) ahahaha that sounds great, I'm guessing his defense is weak though XP
@  TheAngelofDe... : (21 March 2017 - 09:20 PM) Only reason i like heroes now is because i got a five star focused level Karel and he literally is just OP. he can do up to 50 damage and he is level 28
@  Blue Leafeon : (20 March 2017 - 10:21 PM) You never realize how much you rely on a computer for everything until it goes down.
@  Fire Blazer : (20 March 2017 - 03:20 AM) Heroes? yeaaah, and all the animations are kinda like reskins, so they're pretty boring lol. If they actually bothered to seriously animate it, it'd be a different story, but alas. :\
@  Mig64 : (19 March 2017 - 04:25 AM) I was interested in this game until I saw the chibi battle animations.
@  Fire Blazer : (19 March 2017 - 01:59 AM) I play like, a few minutes here and there, but I hardly do much since there's nothing that really interests me. And I don't even understand the skill inheritance... nor do I really care enough to figure it out right now >_>'
@  Idiot : (18 March 2017 - 10:11 PM) I can't get into the phone game scene, no matter how good the game is. I loved kingdom hearts chi but I still dropped it after about a week lol.
@  kirant : (18 March 2017 - 08:50 PM) Kind of. The skill inheritance thing kind of makes it much less fun...but I still play a little.
@  TheAngelofDe... : (18 March 2017 - 08:12 PM) Does Anyone play Fire Emblem Heroes?
@  Fire Blazer : (18 March 2017 - 05:50 PM) any bots for me to take care of
@  Blue Leafeon : (18 March 2017 - 12:28 AM) Massive embedded video, links, a freakishly huge white space, and text.
@  Blue Leafeon : (18 March 2017 - 12:28 AM) yeah
@  Idiot : (17 March 2017 - 10:10 PM) The post I saw was the Taboo thing again so I lost interest in it.
@  Blue Leafeon : (17 March 2017 - 08:01 PM) Okay, THAT bot was just annoying with its posts.
@  Blue Leafeon : (14 March 2017 - 10:37 AM) thanks kirant
@  Mig64 : (12 March 2017 - 10:23 PM) And name it Spambotland.
@  Blue Leafeon : (12 March 2017 - 10:03 PM) @moderators of this forum: You should make a topic graveyard where you put all the spambot posts for future kicks and giggles
@  Mig64 : (11 March 2017 - 01:30 AM) @Fahad Arabian-style Fire Emblem could be interesting, certainly a nice break from the usual European-esque routine, as long as it doesn't become a Middle Eastern version of Hoshido.
@  Mig64 : (11 March 2017 - 01:28 AM) Ephraim VS Chrom, Lucina VS Eirika. I'm noticing a pattern here.

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#1 Cecmus

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Posted 07 June 2016 - 04:34 PM

Hi (• ε •)
Sooooo~ after like 1 year of doing nothing I started to draw again.
Guess I will just show some of my stuff here. (better than showing it at deviant with all that furry, super fat girls and feet or the million pictures of undertale ...)
It actually would be really nice to get some critic and other things that could help me~
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*cough* *cough* At the moment I'm trying to draw faces and eyes (<.<) .
Here are some doodles (BIG DOODLES)

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a grill (ignore the german stuff at the side)
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Anotha one (a really quick something)
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Something about comicstyle and stuff...
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I still have two full folders of old crap ...i don't know if someone wants to see that stuff but I would be willing to show it :P
Have a day~


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Posted 08 June 2016 - 01:23 AM

It's not exactly critique, but is the grill not wearing any pants?

As for actual critique the first thing I looked at in the first two pictures were the eyes. They're actually pretty good imo. You seem to have a solid grasp on proportions, so I think you've already noticed that the girl's left hand is a bit wonky. The only negative thing I really noticed though was the hair. It doesn't quite fall and flow like natural hair does. I'm not talking about the blockiness either, but rather...Basically the rest of the picture has a little bit of life to it. I can imagine what the movement would look like, but the hair just seems a bit static to me I guess? (side note: I was actually trying to describe this exact feeling to my friend the other day when I asked her to look at my sketches. I couldn't get a life-like feeling in the leaves on a tree)

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Posted 08 June 2016 - 05:26 AM

About the pants : I never finish anything.
So yeah I have a very big problems with hands (if they are little) it's pretty much the next thing I'm going to work on~
Aaand about the hair :mellow: I don't know, I dont like drawing that generic/tipical anime-something the hairstyle I'm using is kinda unique. (But the second girl is actually reallllly blocky)

anyways thanks~ :D


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Posted 19 June 2016 - 04:16 AM

Cool man.
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Posted 23 June 2016 - 05:56 AM

 

About the pants : I never finish anything.

 

XDDD

 

the protag guy on the left in the bottom spoiler reminds me of a dude from FE... maybe it's the headband, haha. can't tell if they are wearing pants either (probably are), but the facial expressions are funny, XD


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#6 Cecmus

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Posted 23 June 2016 - 09:23 PM

( ・ω・)ノ
I didn't really had any time to do anything new but I have old stuff...
 
This is probably the best one I did in the last 2 weeks.
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semi-old
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Well~ I don't know maybe you have something like a request for me or idea? :I
If someone is interested in a lil comic made by my umm "art teacher" : http://generic-kingd...blr.com/page/13
 
Have a Day~
 

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Posted 23 June 2016 - 11:59 PM

Whoa.
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Posted 08 July 2016 - 10:37 AM

Ever considered coloring your work?


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#9 Cecmus

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Posted 22 December 2016 - 12:51 AM

Hey it's me the generic lurker that sometimes suddenly pops up~

 

First of all : Yes, yes I did consider it but never do it cuz I only do little and/or fast sketches.(wow it only took some months to answer that.)

 

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Yep, kinda think that I improved a little bit.

Anyways it's nearly Christmas so umm good luck?

Guess it can't become much worse after all that stuff in the past few days...or just lets say 2016 as a whole.

back to lurking


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Posted 15 January 2017 - 09:12 PM

Oh wow have you impr-

 

*reads line saying you think that you've improved a bit*

 

me too lol

 

some of those designs are pretty unique btw, curious if you just thought them up or had some inspiration for them. the first and fourth ones kinda stuck out to me, to be specific.


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Posted 29 January 2017 - 11:45 PM

One month again hmm, time really flies.

 

Nice of you to say that I have improved, if I look at these now I just cringe away...

 

I actually really like to design own characters, not necessarily how they look like but their personality/story and whatever.

Pretty sure games/anime have a great influence but I try to keep my references at a minimum. (I don't want to feel like a copy cat)

 

yeeeep~


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Posted 20 March 2017 - 09:09 PM

Yep, don't really have anything to say.

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I wish I had a little bit more motivation to draw stuff <-<


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