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@  Fire Blazer : (16 January 2018 - 08:01 PM) I could probably find out if I really wanted to, but............. it kind of sounds like a pain. XP
@  Fire Blazer : (16 January 2018 - 08:00 PM) rip @ birthday boy thing lol
@  Fire Blazer : (16 January 2018 - 08:00 PM) ugh. think I got the spam bots. sorry about that
@  Idiot : (15 January 2018 - 05:10 AM) I don't remember what his username was :(
@  Idiot : (13 January 2018 - 06:58 PM) Wow birthday boy has an intense username.
@  Fire Blazer : (13 January 2018 - 03:58 AM) *B ) not B), silly emoticon
@  Fire Blazer : (13 January 2018 - 03:58 AM) like you definitely do Valke, and some others too, XD
@  Fire Blazer : (13 January 2018 - 03:58 AM) yeah I figured, if you didn't say already. it's hard to tell though with typing, A) because I can't hear you and B) because it seems like most of my friends who don't speak English natively, still speak it PRETTY well
@  Valke : (12 January 2018 - 05:45 AM) Thank you for correcting my mistake! English isn't my native language ^^"
@  Fire Blazer : (11 January 2018 - 08:22 PM) TWEWY Switch port tho
@  xcrash1998 : (11 January 2018 - 05:30 PM) And another spambot, has been a while.
@  Fire Blazer : (10 January 2018 - 07:38 PM) anyway I'm glad it wasn't too bad of a situation, haha.
@  Fire Blazer : (10 January 2018 - 07:37 PM) "why does this sound weird" instead of "why does this sounds" weird. XD
@  Fire Blazer : (10 January 2018 - 07:37 PM) I think you were closer the first time.
@  Valke : (10 January 2018 - 06:50 AM) apparently my parents forgot to leave the house key when they left the house... :)
@  Valke : (10 January 2018 - 06:50 AM) *do
@  Valke : (10 January 2018 - 06:50 AM) thank you. i got in one hour after i posted that shout(why does this sounds weird)
@  Fire Blazer : (10 January 2018 - 01:30 AM) that's... actually kind of funny. and adventurous. and dangerous-sounding. XD. I don't have any stories like that (thankfully? lol), but I imagine being locked out is a pain, based on the impression I've gotten from other people, haha
@  Ichigopinkflash : (09 January 2018 - 04:32 PM) Ahh the college years so hilariously funny xD. That was a fun time back then to.
@  Ichigopinkflash : (09 January 2018 - 04:30 PM) I knew if I broke the railing my roommate would kill me. I thought about trying again with something else stacked but I'd already made a whole bunch of noise in my last attempt. My neighborhood was one of those neighborhood watch ones and it was like 2am and I had my work uniform on which was all black lmao. So I gave up and embarrassingly called my parents asking to stay with them the night cause I got locked out of my house lmao

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#1 Cecmus

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Posted 07 June 2016 - 04:34 PM

Hi (• ε •)
Sooooo~ after like 1 year of doing nothing I started to draw again.
Guess I will just show some of my stuff here. (better than showing it at deviant with all that furry, super fat girls and feet or the million pictures of undertale ...)
It actually would be really nice to get some critic and other things that could help me~
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*cough* *cough* At the moment I'm trying to draw faces and eyes (<.<) .
Here are some doodles (BIG DOODLES)

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a grill (ignore the german stuff at the side)
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Anotha one (a really quick something)
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Something about comicstyle and stuff...
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I still have two full folders of old crap ...i don't know if someone wants to see that stuff but I would be willing to show it :P
Have a day~



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Posted 08 June 2016 - 01:23 AM

It's not exactly critique, but is the grill not wearing any pants?

As for actual critique the first thing I looked at in the first two pictures were the eyes. They're actually pretty good imo. You seem to have a solid grasp on proportions, so I think you've already noticed that the girl's left hand is a bit wonky. The only negative thing I really noticed though was the hair. It doesn't quite fall and flow like natural hair does. I'm not talking about the blockiness either, but rather...Basically the rest of the picture has a little bit of life to it. I can imagine what the movement would look like, but the hair just seems a bit static to me I guess? (side note: I was actually trying to describe this exact feeling to my friend the other day when I asked her to look at my sketches. I couldn't get a life-like feeling in the leaves on a tree)

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Posted 08 June 2016 - 05:26 AM

About the pants : I never finish anything.
So yeah I have a very big problems with hands (if they are little) it's pretty much the next thing I'm going to work on~
Aaand about the hair :mellow: I don't know, I dont like drawing that generic/tipical anime-something the hairstyle I'm using is kinda unique. (But the second girl is actually reallllly blocky)

anyways thanks~ :D



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Posted 19 June 2016 - 04:16 AM

Cool man.
Not a very smart person.

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Posted 23 June 2016 - 05:56 AM

 

About the pants : I never finish anything.

 

XDDD

 

the protag guy on the left in the bottom spoiler reminds me of a dude from FE... maybe it's the headband, haha. can't tell if they are wearing pants either (probably are), but the facial expressions are funny, XD


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Posted 23 June 2016 - 09:23 PM

( ・ω・)ノ
I didn't really had any time to do anything new but I have old stuff...
 
This is probably the best one I did in the last 2 weeks.
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Well~ I don't know maybe you have something like a request for me or idea? :I
If someone is interested in a lil comic made by my umm "art teacher" : http://generic-kingd...blr.com/page/13
 
Have a Day~
 


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Posted 23 June 2016 - 11:59 PM

Whoa.
Not a very smart person.

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Posted 08 July 2016 - 10:37 AM

Ever considered coloring your work?


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#9 Cecmus

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Posted 22 December 2016 - 12:51 AM

Hey it's me the generic lurker that sometimes suddenly pops up~

 

First of all : Yes, yes I did consider it but never do it cuz I only do little and/or fast sketches.(wow it only took some months to answer that.)

 

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Yep, kinda think that I improved a little bit.

Anyways it's nearly Christmas so umm good luck?

Guess it can't become much worse after all that stuff in the past few days...or just lets say 2016 as a whole.

back to lurking



#10 Fire Blazer

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Posted 15 January 2017 - 09:12 PM

Oh wow have you impr-

 

*reads line saying you think that you've improved a bit*

 

me too lol

 

some of those designs are pretty unique btw, curious if you just thought them up or had some inspiration for them. the first and fourth ones kinda stuck out to me, to be specific.


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Posted 29 January 2017 - 11:45 PM

One month again hmm, time really flies.

 

Nice of you to say that I have improved, if I look at these now I just cringe away...

 

I actually really like to design own characters, not necessarily how they look like but their personality/story and whatever.

Pretty sure games/anime have a great influence but I try to keep my references at a minimum. (I don't want to feel like a copy cat)

 

yeeeep~



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Posted 20 March 2017 - 09:09 PM

Yep, don't really have anything to say.

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I wish I had a little bit more motivation to draw stuff <-<






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