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The Storm of War


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#1 Nils

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Posted 24 February 2010 - 12:19 AM

This is one of the few poems I have ever written. Its a war poem called the Storm of War. I don't know if its very good so I decided to let the awesome members here comment on it. All commentry is welcome. Ignore the download link.

The Storm of War
By Nils

I hear people brandish their blades
Others have fallen and lie dead
More foes rush through the glade
While others have turned and fled
Men lose the gift of life
While families at home are wild with strife

Horrible is the storm of war
Whose gales stain the land with blood and gore
Musket balls fly through the air

Enemies stare with their icy glare
Cannons fire the Earth to the sky
While soldiers’ forefathers watch from on high

Horrible is the storm of war
Whose gales stain the land with blood and gore

The battle is over and the war is done
Foes march home tired and outdone
In the victors’ home there is happiness galore
Because they ended this bloody war

Ended has this storm of war
Whose gales have halted forevermore

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Posted 24 February 2010 - 01:44 AM

I'm not much of a poet, but I like it. Although I'd like to ask what inspired you to write it.
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#3 Nils

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Posted 24 February 2010 - 11:09 PM

I write poetry like I paint. I do it when I get the inspiration. I get a line in my head and then I write the rest.

I guess its because we were studying some wars in history class and I like that kind of war and then the line came up in my head.
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