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Hey, there! New and need help with a project.

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#1 Deorwine

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Posted 28 September 2016 - 08:52 PM

Hello, FEShrine! My name is Darwin, and my favorite game is Radiant Dawn. I've played it through so many times I can almost recite chunks of the script word for word. My average play time on the save file is something like 14-16 hours per run. This doesn't count resets, though, which I still depend on sometimes. :\ I'm not super good.

 

But!! I need your help with a school project! I don't want to impose so I'm only posting this in the introduction section. Please tell me if this is the wrong place for it. Thank you!

 

I am building a website (from scratch) for a course at college. I'm using the page for Google Analytics research and SEO practice. Thus, I need viewership! I've written a blurb about some of my favorite Radiant Dawn characters, mainly focusing on their growth rates, usability, and whether I like them or not. I'd love to hear your thoughts, either on my stats (are any of them wrong?), my opinions (tell me how yours differ!! I'd love to hear), or my web design (it's looking kinda... old....).

 

Here it is.

 

I'm already patching together another update, which will bring in most of the units I'm still missing, redesign the header, and fix up some minor text errors. Also, Ranulf's entire write-up, elements of Shinon's, and lots of Nephenee and Pelleas'.

 

Thanks so much, folks! I appreciate your time and viewership.



#2 Fire Blazer

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Posted 28 September 2016 - 09:28 PM

hi, we're not Serenes Forest

 

that's awkward

 

I'm guessing this is a copy/paste for views? lol

 

Radiant Dawn huh, that's neat, takes me like at least 3x as long to beat as you I'm pretty sure hahaha

 

the site itself isn't bad, a lot of text in big blocks though

 

and for some reason I get the feeling some of the art is from PoR but I think I'm wrong... hopefully I'm wrong


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#3 Deorwine

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Posted 28 September 2016 - 09:51 PM

hi, we're not Serenes Forest

 

that's awkward

 

I'm guessing this is a copy/paste for views? lol

 

Radiant Dawn huh, that's neat, takes me like at least 3x as long to beat as you I'm pretty sure hahaha

 

the site itself isn't bad, a lot of text in big blocks though

 

and for some reason I get the feeling some of the art is from PoR but I think I'm wrong... hopefully I'm wrong

 

FHWHOAA OOPS!! Yeah that's super awkward. I need more views, yes. That's the entire point of the exercise. I apologize for that!! Oh gosh that's super embarrassing. I've edited that part out.

 

It's a long game! I remember on the box it said something like 70+ hours of gameplay, but I figure that's with like. All the custcenes and so on.

 

Thanks! And yes, we were supposed to add LOTS of copy. I'm going to reformat it eventually.

 

And no, you're not wrong. Lots of the art is from PoR. I couldn't find high res images of some of the less popular characters. :( If I could find RD for everyone, I'd use em.

 

Thanks so much man!!



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Posted 30 September 2016 - 12:05 AM

Hey there.  Welcome.  And good luck (should you choose not to come back after you're done your project).

 

Anyways, I can't speak much about the game itself but a major formatting issue that's killing me is the lack of space between paragraphs.  No indentation and no space really makes it hard to see paragraphs.

 

EX:

 

Spoiler

 

vs

 

Spoiler

 

Edit - Also, your "Other" page has different text size for no reason.


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