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Howl's Sprites
#1
Posted 20 April 2012 - 09:59 AM
pictures face is all messed up, and I haven't figured out how to fix it. Anywho, I'll post more sprites as I make them.
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Adding another. Just a fairly simple splice. I don't know how to feel about this one, but critiques would be appreciated as always.
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I did these 3 last night, and I don't really know how I feel about them. 2 of them are for friends, the 2 males at least.
-Redone-
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----Main Project----
This is what I'm going to be working on for the longest, and hopefully it turns out well. This is it maybe.. 1/4th of the way done
#2
Posted 23 April 2012 - 08:23 AM
QUOTE (Fire Blazer @ Jul 25 2014, 07:59 PM) |
QUOTE (Holy Kensai @ May 18 2012, 08:01 PM) |
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#3
Posted 23 April 2012 - 12:49 PM
Full body- The leftmost arm (OPV) is huge and perhaps a bit far out to the right and the hair on the left (again, OPV) fits weirdly on the jacket, but other than that this is great! I can't wait to see more.
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#4
Posted 23 April 2012 - 02:03 PM
-Some more fixes on this thing. Its coming along i believe, but its a pretty slow process. I think I'm getting better though?
Also Smashed, I hate the purple hair too, and plan to redo it. As for the 6th one... I'm still going to redo the hair, and edit it a little bit.
For the full body. I'm aware his right arm is too big, and am going to re size it around his triceps.
Still a heavy work in progress, and the map was to give me a break from it. Thanks very much for the inputs on everything though
#5
Posted 23 April 2012 - 05:43 PM
Someone else will find the words to explain, I guess.
QUOTE (Fire Blazer @ Jul 25 2014, 07:59 PM) |
QUOTE (Holy Kensai @ May 18 2012, 08:01 PM) |
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#6
Posted 23 April 2012 - 07:39 PM
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#7
Posted 23 April 2012 - 07:49 PM
QUOTE (Caladbolg @ Apr 23 2012, 01:43 PM) |
Someone else will find the words to explain, I guess. |
Well, the concept of the map is very good, however the execution was not so much. I liked where you were going with it, but, there is allot of tile spamming. The mountains are overall good, but there are parts where the shadows are off. As for the paths they seem straight and have random cut offs.
I know it's allot but, it's still good for your first!
As for the full-body, it's good but some parts seem off in shading. Mainly what you have of the sword so far. The shading seems reversed of what it should be. So, fix that. I like where you are going with it though! Good luck!
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#8
Posted 24 April 2012 - 01:12 AM
#9
Posted 24 April 2012 - 01:39 AM
You also need to work on your shapes and shading, as well as color choices and contrasting.
Also Vincent looks to be from a different game style than FE.
#10
Posted 24 April 2012 - 02:32 AM
QUOTE (Howl @ Apr 23 2012, 09:03 AM) |
My first Map. I don't really know if it came out well, so maybe I could get some opinions. Also Smashed, I hate the purple hair too, and plan to redo it. As for the 6th one... I'm still going to redo the hair, and edit it a little bit. For the full body. I'm aware his right arm is too big, and am going to re size it around his triceps. Still a heavy work in progress, and the map was to give me a break from it. Thanks very much for the inputs on everything though |
Map -> Straight Lines, get rid of them. AKA the water.
The Thicket in the forest need to be COMPLETELY surrounded by trees.
Mountain is messy, fix it.
Use different grass tiles.
#12
Posted 24 April 2012 - 01:56 PM
http://gyazo.com/dd7...23183e3d745c4cc
That horizontal line shouldn't be there because it doesn't have any logical reason to be there. (That's just one of many places in which it occurs too, you used the tile that contains it a bunch.)
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#13
Posted 25 April 2012 - 11:38 AM
You did fix my complaint; kudos for that. There is a main problems that I see, though- the forest/thicket section at the top is oddly done. Thickets should be fully surrounded by forests and there shouldn't be random grass trails throughout. One would be fine; two would be a stretch, but it could work; but having it open just looks... wrong, I guess.
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#14
Posted 25 April 2012 - 12:02 PM
An edited Lloyd Sprite, with Durandal, effectively. A bit more tuning up, and then I'll start working on a full sprite animation for him. This is going to be the main character in my Fire Emblem Hack, Leon Zeal
I don't really know anything about sprite editing, or how any of that works, so any help or tips would be appreciated.
#15
Posted 19 May 2012 - 10:13 AM
----- Credit to'White-wolf8'--------
(For the Original Sprite stance, which was Rose)
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Raven Lord Leon's Neutral Stance
#16
Posted 19 May 2012 - 10:51 AM
Also, did you ask Wolfie about using his sprite sheet? If not, here. http://white-wolf8.d...rites-185883683
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#17
Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:22 AM
#18
Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:27 AM
And I'll let him know. He'll probably say yes though. He's nice like that.
"You got a jacked up notion of fair play pal...and it's beginning to piss me off."
"Though a fight every now and again does make life a little more interesting...dontcha think?"
^ This isn't dead, I swear!
Most of my closest friends have qualities that I despise. But I love them all regardless of their faults.
"Why are we trying to narrow God's mercy? I didn't realize there was a limit to how many people could go to heaven."
This will not be removed until I finish my Sprite Series. Arim and AJ VS The World Started December 19, 2013 (I actually still haven't given up on this! XD)
This will not be removed until The Demon Invasion is finished. Started December 19, 2013 (Hue)
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#19
Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:52 AM
#20
Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:53 AM
QUOTE |
So nice, in fact, that people usually mistake him for a girl. |
QUOTE (Fire Blazer @ Jul 25 2014, 07:59 PM) |
QUOTE (Holy Kensai @ May 18 2012, 08:01 PM) |
Gotta love how even in fan fiction I'm a badass. |
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