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#1 Howl

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 09:59 AM

Hey everybody, this is my first sprite, and I'd really like some critique's if you don't mind. I'm looking to get better, and I -think- I formatted it right. However, when I go to insert it with FEditor, the bottom
pictures face is all messed up, and I haven't figured out how to fix it. Anywho, I'll post more sprites as I make them.

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-Edit-
Adding another. Just a fairly simple splice. I don't know how to feel about this one, but critiques would be appreciated as always.
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I did these 3 last night, and I don't really know how I feel about them. 2 of them are for friends, the 2 males at least.
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#2 Nice Middle

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 08:23 AM

That fullbody is awesome.
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Posted 23 April 2012 - 12:49 PM

Normal portraits- Your first two are pretty much immaculate. The third one is pretty awesome for a full custom; perhaps making the face/hair a little smaller would help in making it look more FE styled? The fourth's scarring is a bit over the top, but pretty good regardless. The fifth's hair is kind of derpish, but the rest of him is great. The sixth's hair goes kinda weirdly behind the clothes but is pretty good otherwise.

Full body- The leftmost arm (OPV) is huge and perhaps a bit far out to the right and the hair on the left (again, OPV) fits weirdly on the jacket, but other than that this is great! I can't wait to see more.

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#4 Howl

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 02:03 PM

My first Map. I don't really know if it came out well, so maybe I could get some opinions. biggrin.gif

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-Some more fixes on this thing. Its coming along i believe, but its a pretty slow process. I think I'm getting better though?

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Also Smashed, I hate the purple hair too, and plan to redo it. As for the 6th one... I'm still going to redo the hair, and edit it a little bit.

For the full body. I'm aware his right arm is too big, and am going to re size it around his triceps.

Still a heavy work in progress, and the map was to give me a break from it. Thanks very much for the inputs on everything though

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 05:43 PM

Half of the map is good. Half of the map is bad.

Someone else will find the words to explain, I guess.
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Posted 23 April 2012 - 07:39 PM

Full body portrait = Looks good.. but has absolutely no point.. except for show.
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Posted 23 April 2012 - 07:49 PM

QUOTE (Caladbolg @ Apr 23 2012, 01:43 PM)
Someone else will find the words to explain, I guess.
You are correct.

Well, the concept of the map is very good, however the execution was not so much. I liked where you were going with it, but, there is allot of tile spamming. The mountains are overall good, but there are parts where the shadows are off. As for the paths they seem straight and have random cut offs.

I know it's allot but, it's still good for your first! biggrin.gif

As for the full-body, it's good but some parts seem off in shading. Mainly what you have of the sword so far. The shading seems reversed of what it should be. So, fix that. I like where you are going with it though! Good luck!

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#8 Howl

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Posted 24 April 2012 - 01:12 AM

Well thanks for all the critiques. The full body is not even close to being done, and I'm still going to expand it much more. I don't really know how to do much with the maps and it feels like Im missing certain pieces, but it's probably just that I'm unfamiliar with Mappy still. I'll keep working on it and thanks for the help ^^.

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Posted 24 April 2012 - 01:39 AM

Your necks need to be a little longer for the shoulder widths you use.

You also need to work on your shapes and shading, as well as color choices and contrasting.

Also Vincent looks to be from a different game style than FE.

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Posted 24 April 2012 - 02:32 AM

QUOTE (Howl @ Apr 23 2012, 09:03 AM)
My first Map. I don't really know if it came out well, so maybe I could get some opinions. biggrin.gif

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Also Smashed, I hate the purple hair too, and plan to redo it. As for the 6th one... I'm still going to redo the hair, and edit it a little bit.

For the full body. I'm aware his right arm is too big, and am going to re size it around his triceps.

Still a heavy work in progress, and the map was to give me a break from it. Thanks very much for the inputs on everything though



Map -> Straight Lines, get rid of them. AKA the water.
The Thicket in the forest need to be COMPLETELY surrounded by trees.
Mountain is messy, fix it.
Use different grass tiles.
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Posted 24 April 2012 - 02:34 AM

Paths are cut off and the cliffs are too straight and kinda awkward.
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Posted 24 April 2012 - 01:56 PM

What they said; also, parts of the mountains seem kinda "weird", as in there's a bunch of random lines that have no purpose. For example:

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That horizontal line shouldn't be there because it doesn't have any logical reason to be there. (That's just one of many places in which it occurs too, you used the tile that contains it a bunch.)

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Posted 25 April 2012 - 11:38 AM

I see you've updated, eh? You can/should just make a new post when you make an update, unless yours is the most recent. Helps people know that something's new, y'know?

You did fix my complaint; kudos for that. There is a main problems that I see, though- the forest/thicket section at the top is oddly done. Thickets should be fully surrounded by forests and there shouldn't be random grass trails throughout. One would be fine; two would be a stretch, but it could work; but having it open just looks... wrong, I guess.

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#14 Howl

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Posted 25 April 2012 - 12:02 PM

Hopefully the last update to my map, unless there are more discrepancies you can find in it. Thanks for all the critiques from before, and I tried to fix most if not all of the problems.


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Posted 19 May 2012 - 10:13 AM



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Posted 19 May 2012 - 10:51 AM

Is Raven Lord gonna be the class of the char in your icon?

Also, did you ask Wolfie about using his sprite sheet? If not, here. http://white-wolf8.d...rites-185883683

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Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:22 AM

Sent a message but I dunno if he's still active. I'm very cautious about using other peoples stuff.. I saw you asked her about Marisa ^^. Thanks for the heads up though. If he says I can't use it I'll take it down and start from scratch. (Unless you think it's not safe to use without absolute permission? I checked all of his battle sheets and he's usually very generous about it.)

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Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:27 AM

Not active? I talk to him all the time! XD

And I'll let him know. He'll probably say yes though. He's nice like that. So nice, in fact, that people usually mistake him for a girl.
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Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:52 AM

Okay. Thanks Arim! biggrin.gif

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Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:53 AM

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So nice, in fact, that people usually mistake him for a girl.


N-no! It was because of his avatar! I swear
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