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#1 Elwood

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Posted 04 May 2012 - 09:47 PM

Finally starting a gallery since I'm about to start the big work on my hack. I'll be posting stuff to get pretty serious critiquing since I want this hack to be good. That being said here are the first things to go in my gallery.

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Posted 04 May 2012 - 09:54 PM

They look good - though, the hairline of the last one doesn't fit.

And be careful, you used a flashy hair color for the third one, IMO.

And the second one's face looks kind of derpy imo.
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Posted 04 May 2012 - 09:56 PM

In your fourth mug the colors of the hair and the facial hair don't match, fix that. It's body proportions are also bad, the torso is to big for the head.

Also, what colors did you use for your first one? The outline seems to stand out allot more than the other colors.

The third one's eyes are also off. They seem to far apart.

The second one is fine in my opinion. Someone else may find a flaw though. Keep up the good work!

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Posted 04 May 2012 - 09:58 PM

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The outline seems to stand out allot more than the other colors...


This. You should use only one outline palette for your mug.
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Posted 04 May 2012 - 10:13 PM

Elaborate please.

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Posted 04 May 2012 - 10:14 PM

I believe we said the most.
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Posted 04 May 2012 - 10:16 PM

No I mean on the outline palette thing.

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 05:05 AM

Lloyd + Linus + Batta = No-no.. seriously, the head is very disproportionate to the body, and the hair just looks silly on Lloyd's face. tongue.gif
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Posted 05 May 2012 - 09:51 AM

QUOTE (Elwood288 @ May 4 2012, 06:16 PM)
No I mean on the outline palette thing.

Ok, the palette itself would be your problem. On your first mug The hair is lighter than the rest of the mug. It is less contrasted, you might say. If you make the hair darker that will fix the problem.

So, the outline is ok with all the other parts of the body but when it's on the hair, it's WAY too visible. Hope that helped~!

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 06:39 PM

Alrighty then I'll change the hair color. And Pie... I'll make it look better but I'm still using all those parts.

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 08:15 PM

QUOTE (Elwood288 @ May 5 2012, 02:39 PM)
I'll make it look better but I'm still using all those parts.


... That won't really work, I'm not sure how you will get the proportions right with those parts. However, go ahead, it may turn out good!

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 08:32 PM

Changed my mind actually will probably ditch the Linus body.

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 08:50 PM

That should help. As for the Batta hair, I'm sure it will be fine with little modification.

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Posted 10 May 2012 - 04:32 AM

Alright heres the first set of characters for my hack. I would like to thank Arim for the display design.
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Posted 14 May 2012 - 04:46 AM

Here's what I have so far on Angela's battle sprite. How am I doing?
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Posted 14 May 2012 - 09:39 PM

QUOTE (Elwood288 @ May 14 2012, 12:46 AM)
Here's what I have so far on Angela's battle sprite. How am I doing?
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Holy crap! That is amazing man! Did you do that all on your own? Really good man! Although, the bottom row, there is a sprite that the shadow cuts off on. Just a random find.

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 10:24 PM

Hey thanks bro! Nothing fancy I'm just putting the female swordmaster head on Lyn Blade Lord sheet.

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 11:04 PM

Still, it's really good, even if it is just a battle sprite splice. Fix that shadow thing I mentioned as well. In order to help you out I circled the frame. Despite circling, I mindlessly separated it from the rest of the sheet. Oops.

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 11:06 PM

Haha, isn't it amazing how good a simple splice can make something look? laugh.gif
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Posted 15 May 2012 - 01:47 AM

@Gold-As I said before I am only changing the head. That bad shadow is in the default animation. tongue.gif

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