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#1
Posted 12 May 2011 - 05:11 PM
oh and this is fe7 colors only (i do plan on making more updates this is just and early draft i guess? lol) cant wait till i change armor color on him though =p
umm if the image isnt big enough or what not let me know how to change all that (because im not relaly sure)
anyways here he is. his name is Mason (disreguard jaffar over there...hes only there for skin color referencing)
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#2
Posted 12 May 2011 - 05:21 PM
Actually, find a palate without the orangey part and all. It looks off on the chin, eyebrows, side of the face, and ear.
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#3
Posted 12 May 2011 - 05:47 PM
QUOTE (SmashedFish @ May 12 2011, 12:21 PM) |
That's, ahm... not bad. The part around his ear there is a bit messy, and there's a green line under him, but that's not the real problem here; the ear is. Replace the orangey bits with a blacker color. Actually, find a palate without the orangey part and all. It looks off on the chin, eyebrows, side of the face, and ear. |
the green line is to help me with the border dimensions-least i shouldn't be over i think... (will be removed after im done with him)
yeah ear is being a pain.
reason being i used uhai body partial neck and ear, and harkin face and partial neck (why the colors are messed up)
#4
Posted 12 May 2011 - 06:09 PM
@Ear: Try, like I
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#6
Posted 12 May 2011 - 07:52 PM
But anyway, for your first portrait, that is actually pretty good, IMO. I see some potential there. Good luck with your future sprites, yo!
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#7
Posted 12 May 2011 - 07:52 PM
I can name all characters you used:
Uhai, Eubanks and Harken
#8
Posted 12 May 2011 - 08:13 PM
QUOTE (Fitz24 @ May 12 2011, 02:52 PM) |
The top hairline along with the neck looks very weird. I can name all characters you used: Uhai, Eubanks and Harken |
im not trying to give him facial hair persay. more im just trying to make the skin tones look right...and it seems like more i mess with the more it turns out awkward looking...dammit
@blazer it's like i said, i've never been very good at shading but ill try and make it better xD
#9
Posted 12 May 2011 - 08:47 PM
edit: messed with his hair a little bit and it looks better imo
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#11
Posted 12 May 2011 - 10:55 PM
But like Blazer said, it's pretty sweet for a first portrait.
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#12
Posted 12 May 2011 - 11:05 PM
QUOTE (SmashedFish @ May 12 2011, 05:55 PM) |
Still not bad, but I think the other armor color worked better and the scar is pretty out there. Also, the jawline isn't great, and the neck and face shading both need love (still pillowshaded). But like Blazer said, it's pretty sweet for a first portrait. |
haha thanks ill try getting to work on that right away...
also dammit i knew i forgot about something.
just reread felover3's basic splicing tut (credit goes to him as to why i was able to do as decent as i did - even though i still am not a good sharder) and i should have known there was an easier mether to coloring -.-
lucky for me i can go back to one of the erlier saves (which will save me a but-load of time "maybe")
#13
Posted 12 May 2011 - 11:23 PM
im still gona use green for his armor color (nobody will be able to change my mind on that =p
lol edit #2: forgot to say that reason im using green is that his hair colr will be changed to more a dark brown so should work nicely with the green clothes
edit 3: shading is improved (if at least a bit) from before i hope. might put that scar back on but idk at this point lol
#14
Posted 13 May 2011 - 12:54 AM
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#15
Posted 13 May 2011 - 01:46 AM
QUOTE (SmashedFish @ May 12 2011, 07:54 PM) |
The chin's better, but still not perfect. The palette is amazingly better. As for the scar, try to rip one from an existing sprite. |
lol ok now i have to ask you just where at do i need to fix the chin cause now im lost xD
also have no idea what you mean by the palete being better xD
and yeah i figured i'd look at other scars and go from there. (i'd rather make my own scar than splice one in)
#16
Posted 13 May 2011 - 03:40 AM
That's the simple idea, anyway, I'm sure some spriter could make it more complex...
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#17
Posted 13 May 2011 - 03:43 AM
lol im being a pest but this is kinda fun plus i literally have just about all the free time in the world (although that is going to change - but not by much)
anyways decided that making a scar would be annoying even though it looked easy enough to make so i just spliced in a partial scar and here is the turn-out
#18
Posted 13 May 2011 - 06:24 PM
#19
Posted 13 May 2011 - 07:28 PM
tried to do better shading on the face but im still not sure if its good. it looks good to me but like i've said im not one thats good with shading xD
#20
Posted 13 May 2011 - 07:51 PM
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