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#21
Posted 13 May 2011 - 08:12 PM
QUOTE (Sea Lion @ May 13 2011, 02:51 PM) |
The face should have a lot more of the lightest skin tone in it, you have kind of random blobs of the lightest but it's almost all the middle color. I only use the middle color for the left side of the face, shading around hair, and the jawline. |
yeah...im not good at shading but one of the problems this is from is when i spliced uhai's body with haarkins face the necks conjoined and thats where the whole skin tone got out of wack...
anyways is this any better?
#22
Posted 13 May 2011 - 08:56 PM
Body is pretty good.
#23
Posted 13 May 2011 - 08:59 PM
QUOTE (Fitz24 @ May 13 2011, 03:56 PM) |
Alright, find a chin from another sprite and put it on there, the one you have now is bleh. The top of his forhead looks weird because his hair doesn't remotely cover it. Body is pretty good. |
haha ok and i would have to let someone else edit the hair/forhead area because when it comes to hair i dont even want to bother, because i know it will turn out wrong just about every time.
as for the chin that's haarkins...so...lol
ill look for a new one. but is the shading on the face better or hardly at all?
edit: ok i hope this new chin is better although i'm doubting it will be
#25
Posted 15 May 2011 - 05:43 PM
Credits to Maklo for this tutoria.
#26
Posted 15 May 2011 - 07:04 PM
QUOTE (Masterplan201 @ May 15 2011, 12:43 PM) |
Ok, I saw you still have a problem with shadings so I thought maybe this could help you a little. |
o.O thanks a ton
this should help me out a bunch.
ill update with later with new shading and stuff (but for now i actually don't have the free time =p ). have a trip to get ready for lol
edit: ok so i think this is a lot better but i could be wrong lol. let me know what you think
#27
Posted 29 May 2011 - 11:27 PM
QUOTE (raigntk @ May 15 2011, 02:04 PM) | ||
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I will say this, I has improved a TON since the first time you posted it.
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#28
Posted 04 June 2011 - 05:38 AM
QUOTE (Zelos Wilder @ May 29 2011, 06:27 PM) |
I will say this, I has improved a TON since the first time you posted it. |
thanks xD
i'm probably going to just leave him as is and move on to making new sprites once i return from vacation =p
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#31
Posted 23 June 2011 - 11:00 AM
Wayne: The neck looks a little wide at the base, and the face angle doesn't quite line up right.
Sasha: Something about her looks off, can't quite tell what, but it might just be those colors, personally I'd try a bit more relaxed colors.
All of them are pretty good for a beginner.
#32
Posted 23 June 2011 - 03:36 PM
here is updates of the 2. Oh also noticed what you ment about raven color and apparently i missed a few pixels on the hair but apparently changed the eye color when i was doing recoloring xD . Also almost freaked out when i noticed after i finished moving him over a pixel that i edited the wrong one, but i made up for that by just recoloring him =p. also hopefully the hair is better on him, around his eyebrows now. As for sasha maybe this is a better color but im not sure honestly.
#33
Posted 23 June 2011 - 05:13 PM
As for Isaac he still has some issues I didn't notice before. The shading on his neck is a little funny and there are some random gray shades that are on the outside of his face outline. Finally, that little piece of hair that sticks off on the left (our point of view) looks like it goes on too far as just the black out line color.
Definitely better than the first one though.
#34
Posted 23 June 2011 - 07:25 PM
#35
Posted 23 June 2011 - 10:55 PM
Signature thanks to Shu.
#36
Posted 23 June 2011 - 11:18 PM
QUOTE (Blazer @ Jun 23 2011, 05:55 PM) |
Not bad but IMO needs more splice parts for more originality. |
I agree, add more spliced parts to it.
Issac is alright....kinda, needs more to 'em.
Sasha is WAY to generic village girl recolor...sorry to say.
And Wayne....is just FE6 Karel hair with FE7 Linus's face and Zealot's armor. Try swapping out Linus's face for someone else.
Again, just add cool part to them, it makes sprites 100% better.
#37
Posted 24 June 2011 - 12:08 AM
QUOTE (Fitz24 @ Jun 23 2011, 06:18 PM) | ||
I agree, add more spliced parts to it. Issac is alright....kinda, needs more to 'em. Sasha is WAY to generic village girl recolor...sorry to say. And Wayne....is just FE6 Karel hair with FE7 Linus's face and Zealot's armor. Try swapping out Linus's face for someone else. Again, just add cool part to them, it makes sprites 100% better. |
haha thanks ill take that into consideration but i forgot to mention that sasha is just that, a village girl. as for wayne hes all fe6 spliced with fe7 colors. dont get them mixed up (even though its probably not easy to tell)
yeah ill splice in more stuff later. although I probably wont for Isaac seeing as how he I planned on him being just a basic soilder you would recruit in the game.
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#39
Posted 29 June 2011 - 10:53 AM
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