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#1 Ward

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 07:33 PM

I know I haven't been showing much activity on this website and I decided to let everyone comment on my latest work for the fun of it. Well one is actually a improvement.

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#2 Ashtot

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Posted 19 May 2014 - 02:59 PM

Not bad, although the first one looks a bit foggy or something. The second one isn't bad either, but seems like it could be cleaner or something? i'm not an expert but this is just my opinion. smile.gif

#3 SmashedFish

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Posted 19 May 2014 - 07:26 PM

That's definitely a good start. My suggestions would be to change the skin colors on both, add an outline to the first one's shirt where it meets the inside of his jacket on the first one, change the first one's right eye from our point of view by shading the pupil to make it look more like an average FE eye, and brighten the second one's pupil color to make it not look all black (unless you want it all black, in which case I'd either lighten the white of his eye or make it black as well).

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