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[flyingace24]

@Ryrumeli: That's pretty sweet. Really nice for a first full custom, but as such, has many problems of a first full custom.
It's very, very pillowed. I can't point to one spot since it's pretty much everywhere. The hair is also really flat in the back. I suggest adding some strands to it to make it flow better and to add some depth. His eyes seem a bit oddly positioned. They're a bit too far apart for my tastes.
The Ying Yang symbol is awesome though. You're pretty good with those clothing designs, like the tiger on that one guy's shirt.
Also, no fancy hat? lol.

Anyway, I have a slight touch up that I did in a few minutes.

[Felover3]

Remade Evan, with some help from Char for lineart...

Helpz?

[Shu]

Looks weird, Shading is weird.

Overall, quite weird. Nice try, though.

[bblues]

[Riadansen]

hmm... looks ok if u ask me :S. but it was something that doesnt quite fit in...

[Oblivion Knight]

@Ace- His hair seems too blocky...
@Felover- Too much pillow shading on the hair and not enough shading on his robes. Then there is that red blob thing on the (OPV) right side of his face.

[Dath]

Myeh...it seems like everybody but me is improving.

I need help on color palettes. The last one is the original one. Also, if you have colors you wish to show, that would look good, show me. xD

[Felover3]

@Dath - Whose hair is that?

I don't know which one I like, maybe the green jacket one?

[Oblivion Knight]

Hmm the hair color seems very off...
Are you mixing FE6/7 colors with FE8 colors? (That's a no-no)
I'm not too sure about the jacket, but ... the hair color should be fixed...

[Dath]

I have a color scheme that I used for the hair and the jacket.

@Sheeda-Oh-Wait-Felover, it's a combo of Zeis and a small part of Nils'. xD

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Alright, I did some updates to the mug. I curved the hair to make it less stumpy, and did some editing on the undershirt and the collar with one of the strap type things. Also, I changed the straps to a brown-tan color.

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The one on the right is the same, with FE8 colors.

[flyingace24]

Here's a WIP.



@Dath: I'll post some comments when I get back. Kinda in a hurry at the moment.

[Tsuki-Hime]

So many interesting customs on here, maybe I'll try one.... one day xD

Looks great so far Flying ace

[flyingace24]

^Thanks. Here's a first draft.



@Dath: You have a few pixels sticking out near the far shoulder as well as on the back of his head. They're a grayish blue color if you can't see them. It's also on the clothes on his far shoulder near the belt things as well. Nothing really sticks out at a glance sprite wise. Color wise, however, there are a few things. I think there should be a little less contrast on the clothing and the belts. The lightest shades of each contrast a bit too much IMO from the second shades, thus causing it to stick out. Making it a bit darker would help a lot I'd think.

[Dath]

Heh? Oh, I've already updated the mug a couple hundred times. Here's the updated version, which is also conveniently my avatar.

I love your Petrine. xD

The face looks a little squished together...xD

[flyingace24]

@Dath: I think you went a bit too far. Now it needs a little more contrast.

Anyway, update.

[Fire Blazer]

It's that girl, with the flame lance, FE9...!!!!

P...Pet...Petunia? Petinia? no... Petrine? Petrinia? Petrune? Petrunia? :\ I hate this game.

Hair is odd, I don't like the style of the strands, it's too bad you aren't doing some other style where the sprites are bigger, you aren't going to get an amazing portrait of Petunia without having the room to build on her, however you can still get a great one (what you have ATM). There are some parts of her that bother me but are technically accurate so I can't complain. I don't like how the top of her forhead is cut-off by a straight line though, it looks punctual and bad IMUO, the shoulder pad looks like it's raised too much, the outline looks a little choppy and I'd recommend going over it and looking for any minor fixes, if I'm being too vague as usual I could touch it up myself and see if what I am trying to point out means anything and then show you the slightly touched up version and whether it makes it better or worse and whether you want to apply it to your own work or not; sometimes there are things that are pointed out by me that don't actually need to be fixed...

Wow wall of text ranting, bad habit, just ignore this post kay XDD

Good job with the eyes, considering the difficulty of them, you have really improved since your first draft of Ace's sprite, , good times, I still wish I had half your spriting talent. Now go sprite an FE style batmobile

[Dath]

[Tsuki-Hime]

Hmm it looks great (Petrine) but the right shoulder pad (our PoV) looks bulky and out of place, might just be me, I'm not even sure what Petrine looked like specifically.

[Dath]

http://images3.wikia...0px-Petrine.png

That's what she looks like. Pretty accurate if you ask me.

[Ryrumeli]

Great custom, dude. The only thing which seems off to me in that one is the shading of her hair strings, they seem...choppey...

...but yeah, never something like that looks too good without a background behind it, so you can ignore me. XD






For all you code geass fanboys. (Yeah, you, in the corner, you know I mean you!) A generic head with Emperor Lelouch's clothes. Nothing special, I just needed some reviews for the clothes, since I took like 20 minutes for the whole thing, so... XP There has got to be something off. XD



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