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[Tsuki-Hime]

Hmm I'm sick of complimenting your greatness, didn't know you had a (full) dump here on FES as well, I envy your skills >_<

[boney]

I'm an idiot: She's a soldier, so I had to
Tsuki: It took a lotta practice, failing, and getting embarrassed
and stomped on for me to improve.

k I'll fix those later.
I made an FE4 Altenna mug! 99% FC. It was Natalie based.

References:
http://serenesforest...g/2/fe2-025.jpg
http://serenesforest.../tcg/P/P036.jpg

[Oblivion Knight]

Looks awesome. She just needs some more hair shading and armor shading.

[Dath]

Overall, it looks good, but the direction the shoulderpads are going in the reference pics, make it look like the shoulderpads are going sideways, when you have them going down.

I don't know if this is to make it fit in the hacking box, or what. It looks good as a mug, but compared to the reference art, it looks a little wack.


If that makes sense...

[boney]

The shoulder pads go down for a bit, and then they go sideways,
which isn't shown in the mug. Update:

[Dath]

Looks very nice.

You're right about the reference pics. My bad.

[Dell_Honne]

Looking really good Bones keep it up ;D

[boney]

Wat's tis? Kate my gallery? THNX.

A wip. NO I'M NOT EMO, I LIKE EMO GIRLS DON'T
FLAME ME FOR IT
It's a halfbody of emo April XD

[Felover3]

Her eye creeps the shiz out of me....I shat bricks.

Also her left arm (our POV) seems like cardboard because of the 90 degree angle and wierd hand >.<

Also, what's that above her shirt, is it the collarbone?
Double bewbz?

[Dath]

It seems like she has a giraffe neck. xD

[Dell_Honne]

I agree with Felover creepy eye is creepy >_> *runs for the hills*

[boney]

It's eyeliner. Wat nobody likes the sprite? ;_;

[Oblivion Knight]

Her eyeshadow/eyeliner is ughh. Her breasts are going left (OPV) at a different angle than her head. Her hair and belt are pretty good. *fails at crit for halfbodies*

[Ryrumeli]

Her arms seem not thick enough, I would find it hard to see bones in those arms, personally.(Got it, Bones? Lol?) The antagonism of the shoulder isn't apparent on the left arm(The stretched one), it seems like a straight thing, which would be really hard for her to do unless she was double jointed or something like that. >__<


The eyeliner is right, even though it is pretty thick. Stronger colors in FE also work to show levels of thickness, so she seems right now to use a pretty heavy eye liner, with a pretty big point. With all I know about make-up(Don't worry, I know almost nothing about it! XD ...at least I am manly enough to admit it, kay? >_>), it seems like she should sharpen that eyelining pencil.



Overall, her body seems...she seems like she has no fat in her body, her waist doesn't seem to be big enough.(She looks like barbie in that aspect... Bulimic emo girls are a no go. >.<)



Don't take me wrong though, it was an amazing attempt... The belt is simply awesome, the hair is impecable, and the overall idea is something else. ...and don't worry about flaming, I too have a bit of a thing about emo girls. (I just close my ears when they start to listen to music. XD)

[Tsuki-Hime]

As an emo dress up it looks great (the eye) but it's definetely not something one could find attractive. I personally dislike make up and avoid it like the plague.

Anyway while it's creepy I think it fits the emo context pretty well :/

[Dath]

Hm...the eyeliner's a little...different, but overall, it looks pretty good.

[Dell_Honne]

it is good but vvery creepy too me >_> scary eye ahhh xP

[boney]

[Oblivion Knight]

[Tsuki-Hime]

lol Bones, if it help any, creepy eyeliner > Pinkeye xD

Oblivious may have a point, is there any way you could decrease the eyeliner? :/ It does seem excessive at the moment, realistically emo's seem to tend to overuse it too, but perhaps less would still manage to get the message of emoness across?