Posted 07 July 2009 - 09:54 AM
Yup, just like Shadow said, what stands out after a detailed review are the now-fortified houses. The lake too, I don't know... I don't suppose you could make it bigger? Because it seems too small as it is, like just a bunch of river corners together...not as big as the lake in the original, at least. You could also, like the original,add more tiles with a different colored kind of grass around the lake(One which matches the color on the grass on the corners of the lake would be perfect)
The bridges on the right seem quite spaceful if you ask me. XP I understand you intended them to be closer to the original, but having such wide bridges in one side and smaller on the other wouldn't make a whole lot of sense. XP Unless those were for carts or something like that. <.<
And last bit, that map is one I would really love playing in. XD Good move by adding those extra trees close to where the blue mounted troop should be. It is well done, no repetitive pattern of tiles that I could spot so far.
And the mugshot...seems perfect, aside one obvious detail. >.> I completely agree with you, hairs are, indeed, a bitch. XP The shading doesn't help denoting the volume of the hair over the shoulder, as well as it makes his hair flow in a weird way over his face. The area just after the hair splits is very green, it could use some shading, perhaps making not all lines on his hair start at a similar line, and pull some of them up to fill it a little, giving it some more naturality. I hate to use this term, for I think it adds little to nothing, but it is "pillow shaded", and unfortunately the green shows it pretty strongly.
Wish I could help you more, but I too wouldn't have any other solution to that other than trying to splice something somewhat similar and patch similar parts from it over the parts you feel are the wrongest, and working my way from there. ...again, it is awesome in all other parts, really.

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