Dis late update.
Should I keep the eyebrow like it is but fix it up, or just make it the standard black line?
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Started by V'ren, Sep 08 2009 11:51 PM
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Posted 30 April 2014 - 01:22 PM
Dis late update.
Should I keep the eyebrow like it is but fix it up, or just make it the standard black line?
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Posted 26 May 2014 - 01:15 PM
Wow-ow, who would have thought there would be no responses? *shot*
I think I'm going to call this guy Djute or Richard or something. Don't know if I'm going to work on him anymore.
I think I'm going to call this guy Djute or Richard or something. Don't know if I'm going to work on him anymore.
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Posted 27 May 2014 - 09:17 PM
Oh Dranus is getting redone? Lovely. I like it so far.
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Posted 25 July 2014 - 11:23 AM
Stuff I never put up here.
A crummy lady-knight, an update to Dranus, a spliced head, and a Gold I fiddled with.
I'm prolly going to scrap dat Dranus body; it's ugly and too big.
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Posted 25 July 2014 - 06:59 PM
Not bad, but still looking kinda deformed, so there's room for improvement yet, haha
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Posted 30 July 2014 - 10:50 PM
Something off the top of my head is that he heads seem a bit too far forwards. Shifting them back a pixel or two might help a bit. Beyond that, I'd mess with the first's hair color (bit saturated imo), Dranus's hair color as well (not saturated enough? idk), third's outline color (darker would be better I feel), and Gold's eyebrows. Good starts tho!
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Posted 19 August 2014 - 04:30 AM
Making a mug of Nih for Nih, lolol. Haven't moved on to the body yet.
(Nih is a member of TEB)
No work done on the other mugs as of yet.
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Posted 21 August 2014 - 04:55 AM
You boobs, with your lack of posting.
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Old armored dude for Splicing Contest 34 on TEB.
Mugs used are Dussel, Vigarde, and Brendan.
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Remake of Shu's mug for IS because why not. (The latter ofc being the old one)
Something's off about the new one, most likely the angle of the face not fully matching up, but I can't quite put my finger on why. Also, dat left side (opv) of the shirt.
Mugs used are Marcus, Will, Harken, a bit of Brendan, and a minor bit of some random bandit boss.
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Old armored dude for Splicing Contest 34 on TEB.
Mugs used are Dussel, Vigarde, and Brendan.
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Remake of Shu's mug for IS because why not. (The latter ofc being the old one)
Something's off about the new one, most likely the angle of the face not fully matching up, but I can't quite put my finger on why. Also, dat left side (opv) of the shirt.
Mugs used are Marcus, Will, Harken, a bit of Brendan, and a minor bit of some random bandit boss.
If you train your already good sense of proportion and get a better sense of shading and coloring... ...you really have great odds of being the next great customer around this forums and even FEND, congrats. :3
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Posted 21 August 2014 - 09:16 PM
dat one-sided red cape thingy
the face angle and expression are all kinds of unusual so I don't know how to even suggest to improve it in any way XD
I do like the color choices on the original a lot better though. Idk, they even feel more... "Shu", lol.
the face angle and expression are all kinds of unusual so I don't know how to even suggest to improve it in any way XD
I do like the color choices on the original a lot better though. Idk, they even feel more... "Shu", lol.
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Posted 24 August 2014 - 03:34 AM
Did some fixing. This is most likely going to be the final product.
I prolly will not do anything with the palette, but eh. Why do you find the original's superior?
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Posted 25 August 2014 - 06:58 AM
I think I just like it more/it seems more Shu. Probably safe to play it off and ignore it as bias or something, haha...
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Posted 20 May 2015 - 10:24 PM
Hi! Have an update on what I've been doing since my last post.
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A dude made for IS/HoS, which is obviously deader than dead.
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I saw I had some ok lineart for Stefan in early gallery posts, so I decided to fix it up a while back. Haven't gotten around to finishing it, though.
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An Xmas cavalier for a hack. I have a bit to tweak with the hair, but other than that and frames, it's done.
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First mug I've worked on for a while, and for the same hack as the cav from above.
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Posted 20 May 2015 - 11:56 PM
oh man, GIFs, hardcore
look it's... not Orson? o_O
IS/HoS lol plz
Steeefaaan, finish it? It actually looks pretty solid haha. the straight line for the strap or w/e bothers me a little though
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Posted 26 May 2015 - 12:31 AM
I'll probably finish off Stef when I've finished what I currently have in my workload (Which is sorta deep, actually.)
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Slight edit of the Cavi. I might edit his hair a bit more, actually.
BRIXSBY THE UNBEATABLE. Bandit for a hack
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Aaaand, unfinished mugs incoming!
Slow work on this dude. I'm having problems with his left(opv) side.
I'll probably have this lady done soon, though. look at her ear lmao
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This animation's not as good (and has a frame out of order..) q-q
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Posted 31 May 2015 - 02:03 AM
Might as well update here.
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^Change the left shoulderpad after some critique
^Likewise for eyes
^Currently unfinished guy
^Finished Wyvern Lord~
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