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[SmashedFish]

Haruhi- Great, honestly. Can't think of anything wrong.

Vavan (..?)- Again, nothing jumps out as incorrect, proportions wise. Well done. (Her hair does go both in front of and behind him at places, though. That's... interesting, to say the least. XD)

Breakfast Club: I would venture the guess that the eyes are perhaps a little lower in their heads than they would normally be, but besides that, nothing much. (I'd comment on how you've definitely fixed the weird boobs problem, but what am I supposed to say, nice boobs? Yeah, no. )

Allison, Kairi, and Ariana: Nice heads, nice attention to hair and outfits, but DEM LEGS. XD You could shorten them all legs by half and it woul look a bit more realistic. Heck, I'm sure any given pair of legs is as tall, if not taller, than an average person. XD

[Mikki]

I've been practicing. Blaaaaaaaaaah!

Anyway, I'm gonna be outta town but I will have interwebs but there's a 50/50 chance I might not have pictures up for quite a while. (Will use camera if necessary.)

[SmashedFish]

Alright, enjoy yerself and actually look at people, I bet you 10$ nobody has legs that long

[Axel]

I know you did Kairi for me, don't deny it.

[Mikki]

QUOTE (Axel @ Jul 3 2012, 02:51 AM)

I know you did Kairi for me, don't deny it.

Sure I did. not. Anyway, I'll be home tomorrow from where I am currently which is not my current place of residency, to upload the artwork. Yeah, I forgot my camera. Sue me! D:

[Mikki]

Yeah, I'm back from vacation. And that means. More drawings. Yeah. D:


Sorry, I feel like poo. But I wanna get these up before I forget.

Bubblini Davinci Berry, Genderswap of Pinkamena Diane Pie from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Yes, there's blood. Because he killed the Genderswap of Rainbow Dash. Inspired from Cupcakes, which I don't recommend you guys reading because it is VERY disturbing. Read if you dare. (Click Here To Hide/Show Text)

Cupcakes. Don't read if you are prone to nightmares.

Aerith from Final Fantasy and Kingdom of Hearts. Finally did a new pose. (Click Here To Hide/Show Text)

Serperior Gijinka. It's a guy. (Click Here To Hide/Show Text)

That's all. I had one more that looked so effing badass...but I messed it up.

[Zepher Tensho]

Human boy pinkie pie with blood on him o3o interesting

[Mikki]

QUOTE (Zepher Tensho @ Jul 5 2012, 08:02 PM)

Human boy pinkie pie with blood on him o3o interesting

Again, Cupcake inspired. But thank you! (:

[SmashedFish]

Cupcakes:

no

(related: )

Aerith: Arms and waist seem a bit too thin, imo, but at least her legs are better. XD I mean, you couldn't drive a bus under them, at least! I also like her hair, the feather, and the fact that you're trying new poses; though, ideally, I'd recommend drawing everything you raw with its own pose. *shrug* Small steps, right? You can't say you're not trying, anyway. Honestly, you are doing really well with criticism, which is a good thing.

Serperior: The left shoulder on our point of view sticks out kinda weirdly and separates from the body too high up (is that confusingly worded? I feel like that might be confusingly worded). The entire body, including the arms an legs, is a bit too thin, and the legs are too long again, but only a little bit more so than a normal anatomy. On the bright side, though, nice costume design! I like how you turn things into clothes in general, but this one's quite good in particular.

[Mikki]

QUOTE (SmashedFish @ Jul 5 2012, 10:01 PM)

Cupcakes: no (related: ) Aerith: Arms and waist seem a bit too thin, imo, but at least her legs are better. XD I mean, you couldn't drive a bus under them, at least! I also like her hair, the feather, and the fact that you're trying new poses; though, ideally, I'd recommend drawing everything you raw with its own pose. *shrug* Small steps, right? You can't say you're not trying, anyway. Honestly, you are doing really well with criticism, which is a good thing. Serperior: The left shoulder on our point of view sticks out kinda weirdly and separates from the body too high up (is that confusingly worded? I feel like that might be confusingly worded). The entire body, including the arms an legs, is a bit too thin, and the legs are too long again, but only a little bit more so than a normal anatomy. On the bright side, though, nice costume design! I like how you turn things into clothes in general, but this one's quite good in particular.

Okay. D:

Bah.

[Mikki]

Two more pieces up. And I gotta warn you, one of them is probably the best one since....well, my Vavan piece (Victoria Justice x Avan Jogia). And the other one is all right. Okay. Posting time.

Lemmy Miyauchi from To Heart (Click Here To Hide/Show Text)

Edward and Alphonse Elric from Full Metal Alchemist. This is one is the best one. (Click Here To Hide/Show Text)

[boney]

eehhh, are you really serious with these drawings? They look like a 6 year old did them.

[Cheshire]

Practice makes perfect, or in this case, the fridge...

[Falaflame]

QUOTE (Rexstatic @ Jul 10 2012, 08:06 PM)

eehhh, are you really serious with these drawings? They look like a 6 year old did them.

And you look like a 6 year old posting an idiotic comment like this.

[SmashedFish]

QUOTE (Rexstatic @ Jul 10 2012, 08:06 PM)

eehhh, are you really serious with these drawings? They look like a 6 year old did them.

Boney's constructive criticism ftw

Lemmy: Again with the necks man! The hair and face are great, though.\

Ed and Al: Yes, this is probably your best one yet. Al's far arm should be showing, perhaps, but that's all I can think of.

[Mikki]

QUOTE (SmashedFish @ Jul 11 2012, 10:14 AM)

QUOTE (Rexstatic @ Jul 10 2012, 08:06 PM) eehhh, are you really serious with these drawings? They look like a 6 year old did them. Boney's constructive criticism ftw Lemmy: Again with the necks man! The hair and face are great, though.\ Ed and Al: Yes, this is probably your best one yet. Al's far arm should be showing, perhaps, but that's all I can think of.

Yeah, Lemmy's neck turned out screwy. It should be coming from the ear, right?

[SmashedFish]

yes, it should come from a bit past both ears. I was referring to the length, though.

[Mikki]

QUOTE (SmashedFish @ Jul 11 2012, 02:51 PM)

yes, it should come from a bit past both ears. I was referring to the length, though.

Ah, all right. Well, in case you were wondering, I am currently using references for my drawings. And they're quite handy. But sometimes, I just like to go free style but the results are always ****ed up.

Lust from Full Metal Alchemist (Click Here To Hide/Show Text)

[SmashedFish]

What sort of references? Don't let freestyle results get you own, btw. You're not going to start drawing without aid and be amazing. That's part of why I'm here, to help you out by pointing out anything that you coul work on some to make it even better.

Lust- This is another great one, though her hair goes weirly over her left OPV shoulder.

[Mikki]

QUOTE (SmashedFish @ Jul 12 2012, 07:23 AM)

What sort of references? Don't let freestyle results get you own, btw. You're not going to start drawing without aid and be amazing. That's part of why I'm here, to help you out by pointing out anything that you coul work on some to make it even better. Lust- This is another great one, though her hair goes weirly over her left OPV shoulder.

Thanks! I usually use How to Draw books as references and (some) bases on deviantart, but some of 'em on there are terribly drawn.