His name is Nathan.

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Posted 15 August 2011 - 01:35 AM
Posted 15 August 2011 - 01:42 AM
Posted 15 August 2011 - 01:48 AM
QUOTE (Ryoji @ Aug 14 2011, 08:42 PM) |
0_0 your mugs look so clean compared to mine >_> Looks good but like his hair coming down to his face in the middle looks off for some reason. |
Posted 17 August 2011 - 03:59 PM
Posted 18 August 2011 - 09:10 PM
QUOTE (Sea Lion @ Aug 17 2011, 10:59 AM) |
Joseph: Trim looks kinda wacky. For colors other than gold or silver the trim is always really tricky, it's not done how it is normally. I've never gotten a different color trim to look nice. Where his neck meets his armor it also looks a little funny, like you used too much of the outline color maybe. Nathan: Wow, that is a very long neck. Also, he has a random outline color pixel under the left (our point of view) eye. His beard also looks a little funny I think, not positive about that. Paul: I don't know why but I really like that one. The color scheme works really well. But, his cloak thing? Waaaay too symmetrical, pretty sure you just flipped the left cloak and put it on his right side, right? There should be some differences between the two sides. Also, the hair, blonde hair is extremely tricky to work with (any lighter colors are) if you look at the edge of his hair where it meets his forehead there's too much of the darkest color. Reference some other blonde people to see how to do it right. |
Posted 18 August 2011 - 10:15 PM
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Posted 20 August 2011 - 01:39 AM
Posted 20 August 2011 - 02:31 AM
QUOTE (Sea Lion @ Aug 19 2011, 08:39 PM) |
Liking the cloak a lot more but in the right (opv) side of it looks like there's a line of the outline color going through and the shoulder should end there. Also for the hair, I'm not sure if this is the right word, but I don't think there's enough contrast between the lightest and the middle color, darken up the middle color a bit. |
Posted 20 August 2011 - 08:20 AM
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