So how is Caleb now? I think something's wrong with the right side of his hair, though... The left side definitely looks a lot better, hoever. Thanks for everyone's help~
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Started by Kairu-kyun, Jul 30 2011 05:00 AM
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Posted 01 August 2011 - 04:36 PM
So how is Caleb now? I think something's wrong with the right side of his hair, though... The left side definitely looks a lot better, hoever. Thanks for everyone's help~
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Posted 01 August 2011 - 06:34 PM
It's getting better, try and darken it up near the back side where the light can't reach. Also, on the left side, the farthest bang to the left looks pillow-shaded. I'd play around with that. Lastly, there's a stray pixel between that hair that is sticking up and the bang below that, which I would erase.
Okay one more thing--that red is so bright XD
Okay one more thing--that red is so bright XD
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Posted 01 August 2011 - 08:05 PM
That pixel though, I just pasted onto the one before, so it's not in the actual sprite.
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 02:19 AM
oh... wait, what?
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 02:38 AM
Nvm, the pixel's not a problem~
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Posted 02 August 2011 - 02:33 PM
Crappy first map that's not finished, but the mountains and paths are hard!
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Posted 06 August 2011 - 04:53 AM
1. Kazekiri (name pending)
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Posted 08 August 2011 - 04:09 AM
Some custom(?) sprites of Lenneth, Hrist, and Silmeria from Valkyrie Profile~
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Posted 09 August 2011 - 06:24 AM
A new Lukras with hair from scratch~
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Posted 12 August 2011 - 01:25 AM
Eris, the lord for my hack. Anything wrong?
Although I don't know why I'm still posting, no one else is.
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Posted 12 August 2011 - 02:01 AM
| QUOTE (Kairu-kyun @ Aug 11 2011, 06:25 PM) |
Although I don't know why I'm still posting, no one else is. |
This really isn't the place to post if you want people to critique you...
But then again... Sprite threads don't really generate that much traffic.
If you want the hardcore "don't hold back" critique, you should post your sprites at Fire Emblem New Dawn. At least, the new, more dead, one.
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Posted 12 August 2011 - 03:38 AM
Can you post the things when they aren't zoomed in or shrunk down? it's really hard to see them clearly, or critique them clearly, when they're all missized. D=
And most of the time people are just too lazy to comment, even if they see things... I blame the fact that the FE community is dying out... XP
And most of the time people are just too lazy to comment, even if they see things... I blame the fact that the FE community is dying out... XP
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Posted 09 September 2011 - 03:36 AM
Oh wow, an actual update? It's a Bow General! It's complete, though I don't know if it's smooth or not. It's even 16 colors!
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Posted 09 September 2011 - 03:42 AM
That's not a bow, that's a freaking ballista. Although given the size of General's other weapons, that makes sense.
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Posted 03 February 2012 - 03:22 AM
So I haven't posted in a while, but if I could get criticism on this, please?
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Posted 07 February 2012 - 10:58 PM
I love the Bow General. He just looks so tanky and badass. I'd love to see him in action. XD
I like the latest portrait too but a few things bother me:
First, the shoulders are pillow shaded a bit, mainly the corners.
Then there's the sword scabbard or whatever it is. It just doesn't look natural. I can't tell what kind of position it's in and it look flimsy, like it's made of rubber or something. Unfortunately I'm not a great artist so I can't actually tell you how to make it better, so this critique isn't really that useful >_>
I like the latest portrait too but a few things bother me:
First, the shoulders are pillow shaded a bit, mainly the corners.
Then there's the sword scabbard or whatever it is. It just doesn't look natural. I can't tell what kind of position it's in and it look flimsy, like it's made of rubber or something. Unfortunately I'm not a great artist so I can't actually tell you how to make it better, so this critique isn't really that useful >_>
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Posted 10 February 2012 - 01:28 AM
You have the right clothing designs that go with your characters. I cant say to much because I'm on my ps3 here.
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Posted 09 April 2012 - 02:32 AM
This is Tyr, could you give me some constructive feedback?
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"You got a jacked up notion of fair play pal...and it's beginning to piss me off."
"Though a fight every now and again does make life a little more interesting...dontcha think?"
^ This isn't dead, I swear!
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This will not be removed until I finish my Sprite Series. Arim and AJ VS The World Started December 19, 2013 (I actually still haven't given up on this! XD)
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Posted 27 April 2012 - 12:50 AM
Woah, that's NOT supposed to be there.
I edited it.
I edited it.
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