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#21
Posted 02 April 2009 - 03:01 PM
#23
Posted 02 April 2009 - 08:15 PM
Suddenly, the Anouncer says, "You two, Gant and the Axefighter are fighting! Wait yo---"
"Shut Your trap..," Says Ryoku, as he Kills the Announcer becuase of his extreme speed.

#24
Posted 02 April 2009 - 09:34 PM



QUOTE |
Fire Blazer -- Man Cute is on |
#25
Posted 02 April 2009 - 10:20 PM
Then he thought smiling happily, "But that's okay, becuase I'm just here to train." After a moment Oler resumed watching the match.
#26
Posted 02 April 2009 - 11:16 PM



QUOTE |
Fire Blazer -- Man Cute is on |
#27
Posted 03 April 2009 - 12:06 AM
First of all, stop being so confusing. Pick someone to fight and stick with it. People may not respond super fast but that can't be helped just wait and be patient, there are times where you may be busy and you can't respond and you probably wouldn't want people to just go fight someone else. So point is pick someone to fight and fight them and don't switch... D:
Mankut, the only thing I noticed was you misspelled 'realized' but otherwise you are pretty good.
TDS:
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Skyler walked towards Ryoku. "Very well, draw your sword." The trueblade demanded. |
At the end of something being said you use a comma instead of a period, meaning it would be "Very well, draw your sword," the trueblade demanded. That's pretty much it.
Rennac: When RPing preferably use past tense especially because we are all using past tense (most of us anyway I think...). So "Bayan walked into the room". And you don't need to go "*looks at person*", just say "Bla bla bla" said Bayan.

Ryoku: When somebody says something it is in quotes. Even if it is your own person. You don't do *action*, you say what happens through words. Also, Gant = axefighter, Eton = knife-user, you pretty much said Gant is fighting himself, XDD.
Also killing the announcer is prohibited, first of all the announcers are usually described as very tough themselves as to avoid being hurt by things like that and it ruins the thing if you kill the announcer and the arena people would get security on you and kick you out, so yeah... D: D:
Here is what would be better.
"...With pleasure.." said Ryoku, licking the tip of his blade. "This will be real fun..."
The announcer didn't want the two people interrupting the existing match-- "You two, Gant and Eton are fighting! Mobilize yourself to the field next door where your match can take place concurrently."
"Shut Your trap..." said Ryoku. With extreme speed he slashed at the announcer; fortunately the man dodged but his hair was cut. Furious at this action the security came and talked Ryoku into walking over to another area where another arena match could take place as well, stating that Ryoku would have his chance to shed blood as he had wished.
Signature thanks to Shu.
#28
Posted 03 April 2009 - 02:03 AM
Eton turned around to face his opponent with his knife drawn awaiting his opponents attack as he went into a defensive stance.
#29
Posted 03 April 2009 - 02:35 AM
((TDS Yeah, I suppose I did. Sorry about that.))
#31
Posted 04 April 2009 - 05:45 PM
IC:
The attack pummeled the Earth and a large impact followed. The whole arena shook for a second, making people stumble and head for something to hold onto as to keep their balance. An explosion of rocks and dirt occured; after it subsided, Gant began to regather his axe. The dirt had claimed the air and proved to hide his presence. Gant had hoped that he would have enough time to pull his mighty axe out of the ground and regain his composure before Eton came at him, although he had his doubts, considering his opponents speed and the fact that he already knew where Gant's hidden armor was.
Signature thanks to Shu.
#32
Posted 05 April 2009 - 03:51 AM
#33
Posted 05 April 2009 - 04:16 AM
*OOC: visionless area being the dirt cloud, since you can't see much there besides brown dirt/dust or w/e in the air and the shadows of people.
Signature thanks to Shu.
#34
Posted 05 April 2009 - 04:59 AM
#35
Posted 05 April 2009 - 10:12 PM
"No point in hiding!" He yelled givign chase.
#36
Posted 06 April 2009 - 10:52 PM
After wiping off the majority of the blood that was spilling out he quickly removed the little under armor he had as to increase his speed just slightly but lower his protection. There was no point in trying to protect himself now, he was already injured and figured he should go all out in order to win.
OOC: *giving, *pursue (just had to do it)
Signature thanks to Shu.
#37
Posted 06 April 2009 - 11:21 PM
"Let's go." Eton muttered and resumed his charge.
#38
Posted 06 April 2009 - 11:53 PM
With a swift motion he took a step forward and aimed a horizontal swing at the legs of Eton, forcing him to somehow dodge. He prepared himself to follow with more devastating attacks that had a large range of impact due to his large axe, in order to keep his enemy away from him so that he couldn't be quickly stabbed.
Signature thanks to Shu.
#39
Posted 07 April 2009 - 12:04 AM
"That axe too big for you to wield?"
#40
Posted 07 April 2009 - 02:11 AM
With a large grunt he grabbed Eton's shirt and grabbed the arm that had equipped the dagger; with large force he threw the arm at Eton's left shoulder and created a small yet significant cut, and then proceeded to elbow him and stomp him to the ground.
Just as soon as he was about to smash his axe on Eton's face, the wound overtook him and he threw up blood on Eton's face. Holding his gut the grip on his axe let up a little.
I have nowhere to go after this... If I just die here then it matters not... My fate is to be alone, live alone, travel alone, and die alone... no... what am I doing... Was it not me who, only a few minutes ago, declared that my will would overpower his? How can I stumble here to humiliate the only thing that has ever accompanied me; my axe... Iraminus...
Gant stood up, stumbling. Blood gushed from Eton's face, who was now lying in the ground. Only a couple seconds had passed between Gant's half-hearted punch delivered to the knife-user.
Gant grinned and once again raised his axe in the air above the body. His will could only last a couple seconds more; after which he would become unconscious and most likely die.
Signature thanks to Shu.
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