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[Fitz24]

This is the first time I've done one of these, so here it goes!

Name; Travis Hezlot

Age; 25

Race; Human

Gender; Male

Personality;
A blunt individual with an odd sense of humor. Will argue his opinion on almost anything. Very passionate and extremely loyal.

Not the most social person, hides a lot to himself. Tries to do everything himself without any help.

Physical Description (Mug);
Coming Soon.

Bio;
Born into wealth has had what he wanted handed to him. The Hezlots are a very wealthy family in Crimea with his father being one of the most famous blacksmiths in Tellius. Travis was trained by his father in the way of swordsplay and has had his fair share of equestrian training. Travis didn't enjoy using swords, and preferred lances. He yearns to be a Royal Knight of Crimea. As for now, Travis works with a few of his friends in a mercenary company killing bandits and helping neighboring towns. Travis enjoys his work.

Important/Distinguishing Features;
-Uses a lance(called Nhor) made by his father, along with other weapons he can get his father to forge for him, all of which are custom fitted for him.
-Has a lot of funds
-Leads his mercenary group
-Is a Cavalier with a lot of experience using lances over swords

[Dath]

Overall (since I guess I'm the owner of the RP) the two profiles are good, but could you guys nerf up the age on them?

A four year old would never be admitted into the mage academy, and a 16 year old would not be the leader of a mercenary group or have extensive training in spear.

Franz's official age in The Sacred Stones is 19, and he's still a rookie.

[Green]

[Dath]

1.) Which part? I have no problem with the Tudere bloodline, just the age and knowledge of skills. If it's the latter, you can post as many characters are you want.

2.) I'm not a global mod, and anybody can create a new topic.

3.) This is the thread that we talk about it in.

[Green]

K, thanks.

Well, since your character is so OP, I was assuming that you had some sort of relationship with the plot. I mean, an RP without a GM is basically dead. You seem to know the story well enough to create a character with an enormous amount of power, why not take the position?

I think it would be best us to separate the chat thread from the signup, if you would like, I can make a chat thread. Having a separate chat thread would be nice since people wont have to navigate through all this clutter to find something important.

Since you said anyone can start a chapter, I'll bite. After one more person signs up, I'll start a new thread.

[Seraphinox]

Alright, I created the discussion thread, from henceforth this is only the Signups thread.

Discussion thread --> http://forums.feshri...=ST&f=35&t=4116

If this gets at all big enough perhaps it will warrant it's own sub-forum haha

Now let me go finish my character...

[Dath]

[Seraphinox]

Don't forget that we have Felover on his way back soon enough, he's mod of the whole RP forum and would most probably want in on this...

[Dath]

He actually does very little RPing than his role entails him.

Or maybe it's just that he's super busy with IRL and the forum RP.

[Green]

Harsh? Hardly, you want harsh, go to FEE, that place is a freaking shark tank .-.

Anyways...


[QUOTE]1.) How is my character overpowered?[/QUOTE]



[QUOTE=Dath,Mar 24 2011, 08:04 PM]
Name; Zekk Wilder

Age; 200+

Race; Branded(Dragon)

[/QUOTE]


[QUOTE=Dath,Mar 24 2011, 08:04 PM]
-Is also a former King of Daein.
-One of the most respected men on Tellius due to his wise tactics and shrewd mind.
-Also one of the deadliest men on Tellius, as he has the electric blade Aethro, and the light-magic infused blade Kierbo, though rarely does he have to unsheath more than one of them at one time.
[/QUOTE]

I, personally dont have a problem with this, the other Rp'ers however might.


[QUOTE=Dath,Mar 26 2011, 04:55 PM][QUOTE=Julia,Mar 26 2011, 09:37 PM]K,
5.) The most lol-worthy. Blazer doesn't just promote them to be global mods just because I can write a detailed character biography. xD
.[/QUOTE]

Global mod =/= RP mod. Gm is just another way to say RP's head mod. I forgot what GM stood for but I'm pretty sure it isnt global mod. The GM is responsible for continuing the story, thats why we need one.

[QUOTE]3.) I created the story, so yeah, I know a lot about it.[/QUOTE]

Exactly why you'd make the perfect RP mod. You know the story. I'm willing to help you out as well if you need it.

By the way, do you have a name for this RP?

[Dath]

Haha, I used to be active on FEE. That place is probably more deadly than a sharktank. XD

If he's 200 years old, he's not gonna be an idiot.

And neither am I. I'm not going to act like some year 1 RPer and be, "Zekk grabbed both blades out, and slashed, killing both men, while continuing walking. Anybody who came within a 100 meter frame was killed by lightning, ya-da-da-da."

If you get to know me and my RPing style, you'll realize that I do overpower my guys, but I rarely fight more than one "generic" thing in a single post. So I might spend a 6 paragraph description of Zekk's awesome skills, but in the end, it'll have only been one person who actually dies.

GM in a foruming community usually stands for Global Moderator, which is, as you already know, I'm sure, a Moderator who moderates the entire forum usually. I've never heard GM in any other use, though perhaps you could be right?

As for RP mod, I wouldn't go that far, but maybe like Head of "so-and-so" RP, perhaps.

I called it "War of Nations," but I dunno if I like that. Maybe someone else could create it.

[Fitz24]

[Green]

Okay, I guess your signup is fine, just no killing other RP'ers characters off unless you have the RP'ers permission. There will be cases where we'll be able to kill of a persons character without his permission such as if the person/character continues to hinder the plot on purpose and is a just a downright burden.

RP thread will be up in a few, let me compose my post.

[Dath]

25 is good. Thank you.

I used to have a list of general rules for an RP, but I don't know where it went.

No killing off other people.

No Modding. Meaning don't be all uber and defeat all the enemies with one blow of your awesomeness.

No controlling other people's characters.

Don't be a dick, either. Nobody likes it when one character is the sullen, "Cloud or Leon type."

[Green]

A character can be emo if they want, its the RP'ers loss, dont see why it has to be a rule.

[Dath]

It's not an official rule, just something I made up. If someone's emo all the RP, and not talking to anybody, just killing people, it's not really any fun. The whole point of RPing is to connect with other people, as you progress through a plot.

[Seraphinox]

Good 'nuff ?

Name; Seraph Aerith

Age; 22

Race; Human

Gender; Male

Personality;
Monikered as "He who laughs. A great sense of humour and always willing to help out with things. Extremely Loyal to his friends.

Has an unlucky habit of saying the wrong thing at the wrong time.

Extremely independant.

Has strong opinions and a fiery temper. Extremely unhelpful when it comes to things he feels are pointless, go against his opinion or if it has to do with authority infringing on his freedom.

Always fights what he believes is the greater good.

Physical Description (Mug/Written);

6"3, Broad shoulders, not the strongest, brown hair that defies logic (Not in an anime type of way, just in the way no matter what he does he can't control it/shape it). Has a habit of wearing the exact same clothes all the time. Acute hearing but not the greatest eyesight.

Bio; Born on the border in a secluded part of Crimea to average parents, his father trained him with a bow from a young age and is adept with all kinds. Gave up the prospect of being next in line to take over the family farm by running away. Has little knowledge of what is happening at the current situation in the world.

Important/Distinguishing Features; Suspects Everyone

[Dath]

It's...somewhat good. Again, the age, but 17 is better than 16, if only a little bit. And I'm glad that you didn't just say like, he's a master of archery. xD

I've had so many people who post their profiles like...age 13, and they say that they have killed many people and are a dangerous person. 13?

But I like it. Paranoid=awesome RP trait. XD

[Green]

Age him, more, at least 22.

[Seraphinox]

22? Sacrilicious!!

But it shall be done!

So accepted then?