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[Lancer]

Forgive my poor quality camera :/

And it's only after I finished the sketch that I noticed I messed up a bit with the legs... lmao.

Anyways, please leave your opinions here. Her name's Lancielle, and she's a Lancer, or basically a myrmidon glass cannon who uses lances (creativity ftw).

About Lancielle:
Her father was a famous knight before he died serving his lord during a siege. Lancielle never forgave her father's master for sending her father to his death in the lord's arrogance, and so she vowed to never become a knight. Instead, when she had finished her training, she left to find work as a mercenary, so she could choose a master worthy of her skills and loyalty.

[Nice Middle]

Wow! You're awesome! And... you have skill. You should definitely open your DeviantArt account and post your arts here, if you accept the advice.

Can't wait to see more.

[arimibn]

Can we make her be a female Halberdier or somethin? That'd be more convenient.

[Lancer]

Phase 2:



Armored, soldier version on the right. Some basis off Nephenee (helmet in particular), equipped with a <pretty long> short spear. I didn't bother to shade most of her, but she's supposed to be wearing stockings right above her boots lol (since it's not coloured I can bet it might be hard to tell).

I wrote the stats in the centre cause I'm too hardcore of an FE fan

Screw you, phone camera.

[Golden Warrior]

I like it. I like the overall concept of this character as well. Class is... Halberdier? I can't tell at this point. Also, I like Nephenee, so I have no problem with you basing off of her!

[Nice Middle]

Class is "Lancemaster", as written, Gold.

And it's nice, uh, Lancer.

[Golden Warrior]

QUOTE (Caladbolg @ May 3 2012, 05:32 AM)

Class is "Lancemaster", as written, Gold.

Note to self:Pay attention to more things than you usually do, darn it!

Anyways, nice class, although, they both make me think of the already existing classes. XD

I never noticed. Lancer making Lancielle. Coincidence? XD

[Nice Middle]

Hey Lancer, she has a sweet belly button, too.

[Golden Warrior]

I don't see any visible belly button... I'm bad at looking closely aren't I...

[Nice Middle]

Well, there's some line on her shirt that looks like it, IMO.

[Golden Warrior]

I think there originally was going to be one, but those are eraser marks. Regardless, this is a very nice drawing.

[Elwood]

QUOTE (Golden Warrior @ May 3 2012, 04:39 AM)

QUOTE (Caladbolg @ May 3 2012, 05:32 AM) Class is "Lancemaster", as written, Gold. Note to self:Pay attention to more things than you usually do, darn it!

Ah, classic Gold. Not paying attention then saying something silly!

[Lancer]

Caladbolg made a request for a sniper, and after a few days I finally got around to finishing it.



I don't know his name either lols. Original mugshot courtesy of Caladbolg:



Edit:
A sprite for Lancielle now

[The_Fallen]

Those sketches looks pretty awesome! I liek the designs!

[Nice Middle]

Awesome... just... awesome. Thank you so much.

By the way, the name's Ernest.

[Golden Warrior]

That has got to be the awesome-est sniper I have ever seen. This is simply beautiful art! Keep up the good work man!

[Howl]

Since I don't really critique art aside from my own my comments will stay with me for now. Anyway.... Am I mugging the girl with or without the helmet? Secondly, will I be using the colors from your sprite? (I'm assuming I will, but I thought I'd ask.)


Also- I'm opening an art thread because of you.

[Lancer]

I'd say without the helmet, since she will be starting as a soldier after all. Thanks

Edit: I think I'll use the armoured version as the Lancemaster / Halberdier

[Golden Warrior]

QUOTE (Lancer @ May 9 2012, 12:54 PM)

I think I'll use the armoured version as the Lancemaster / Halberdier

That will work great, I think! I like all your drawings so far! So keep it up!

[arimibn]

Wait...You do drawings now...? WELL IN THAT CASE....